I Want Justice.
Psychic adventures, Pt. 217 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
The story line is fascinating as you relate your interaction with both the living and the spirit of the murdered young man. I am looking forward to the next episode.
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The story line is fascinating as you relate your interaction with both the living and the spirit of the murdered young man. I am looking forward to the next episode.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thanks so much for taking time to read my story and send along your wonderful, encouraging review. I much appreciate it jj. Blessings...Bev
Comment from valentinacardillo
Yes I liked this one great write here . I am much in to your story I enjoyed the way to set the scene , and your choice of words . I have read a lot of s.brown books to inform me on some of the language but its nice you put it in the notes for your readers . Thank you I will look for more of your work Valentina
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Yes I liked this one great write here . I am much in to your story I enjoyed the way to set the scene , and your choice of words . I have read a lot of s.brown books to inform me on some of the language but its nice you put it in the notes for your readers . Thank you I will look for more of your work Valentina
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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I so appreciate your wonderful review and the time you took to read and send along your encouraging comments. Thank you Valentina! Best wishes...Bev
Comment from BethShelby
I admit that I find this story very intriguing. I've had some experience I can't explain but I certainly don't consider myself psyhic. I'm interested in finding out what happens next. Is this something you were born with or did it develop over the years?
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I admit that I find this story very intriguing. I've had some experience I can't explain but I certainly don't consider myself psyhic. I'm interested in finding out what happens next. Is this something you were born with or did it develop over the years?
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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A combination of both Beth. I started with terrifying experiences at about 6, and was in my 30's when I decided to start seriously working to understand and channel them. There are very good books on the subject, but its when I began to publicly expose myself to challenges and opportunities to use what I had that I began to really hone them. Its an ongoing challenge; but I'm grateful for the gifts I've received in helping others. I so appreciate your wonderful review; and you taking time to read and send along your thoughts. Best wishes...Bev
Comment from bowls
I'm so glad I found the second part of your story tonight! I've been wondering what would be at the video store. This was an interesting chapter and showed your main character in a positive light. I believe this will help your readers accept what she is saying and doing as being totally sincere. You've developed the plot nicely to this point. Now your readers will want to know what you'll do next and, for that matter, what Steve will do. Just one tiny thing: in paragraph 2 you have a capital letter in mid sentence (now,It's possible) I await part 3!
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I'm so glad I found the second part of your story tonight! I've been wondering what would be at the video store. This was an interesting chapter and showed your main character in a positive light. I believe this will help your readers accept what she is saying and doing as being totally sincere. You've developed the plot nicely to this point. Now your readers will want to know what you'll do next and, for that matter, what Steve will do. Just one tiny thing: in paragraph 2 you have a capital letter in mid sentence (now,It's possible) I await part 3!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thanks so much for taking time to read and send along your wonderful comments on the story. I'm so glad you like it! I'll correct that error right away. Your encouragement is so very much appreciated bowls. While composing the two parts, I've had some interesting psychic phenomenon occurring, so I believe Steve is around helping. Happy Sunday to you...Bev
Comment from swosugrad09
Your story is very well written. It intrigued me from the beginning. I hope to read more and that Steve will receive the justice he is deserves.
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Your story is very well written. It intrigued me from the beginning. I hope to read more and that Steve will receive the justice he is deserves.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thanks so much for your great review. I believe you will find the outcome as satisfying as I did. Really appreciate you taking time to read and send along your insights. Best wishes...Bev
Comment from fionageorge
Interesting read, and good narrative to draw the reader into the physicality of the store and the characters. Good use of dialogue, and I felt the story moved at the right pace.
I'm the only [one] who closes,
I look forward to your next chapter. I am intrigued as to the offer being taken up, and what happens. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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Interesting read, and good narrative to draw the reader into the physicality of the store and the characters. Good use of dialogue, and I felt the story moved at the right pace.
I'm the only [one] who closes,
I look forward to your next chapter. I am intrigued as to the offer being taken up, and what happens. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thanks so much Marijke. Thanks also for finding that typo and I've changed it...much appreciate you taking time to read and send along your thoughtful and encouraging insights. Best wishes...Bev
Comment from Gungalo
Ahhh this is an interesting story just taking off. Love the setting for it and the way you led into the crux of the problem. Steve's story and ultimate haunting of this store promises to be a great tale!!!
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Ahhh this is an interesting story just taking off. Love the setting for it and the way you led into the crux of the problem. Steve's story and ultimate haunting of this store promises to be a great tale!!!
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thanks my friend. Glad you liked it! I appreciate so much your comments and encouragements. xx Bev
