Comment from bayoupoet

Excellent

This is a very well written poem with wonderful imagery and mood. It is such a pleasure to read your spectacular poem for you. Well Done Poetess!
sandra

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011

Thank you for reading and the generous review. Poetry doesn't come as naturally to me as some, and when I think I get it right - I feel good. Your kind remarks are appreciated. ~patty~

reply by bayoupoet on 26-Jan-2011

You are very welcome!

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

Hi Mustangpatty. Your poem is amost perfectly rhymed but the overall effect is excellent. Love is best shared in bed for the closer you are to each other is foremost. Rhythm good and energy is great and an easy read.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011

Thank you for reading and the generous review. Poetry doesn't come as naturally to me as some, and when I think I get it right - I feel good. Your kind remarks are appreciated. ~patty~

Comment from Perp Ihebom

Excellent

This is a nice piece of work about darkness of another definition. It flowed well until the last line. I think another look at this last line may improve the poem further. kudos

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011

Thank you for reading and the generous review. Poetry doesn't come as naturally to me as some, and when I think I get it right - I feel good. Your kind remarks are appreciated. (I will take a look at the last line.) ~patty~

Comment from sgalletti

Excellent

Hi Patty! Nice choice of art work by Sweet Linda. Excellent Whitney poem that reminds us that even in the darkest hour when we might feel abandoned, God is, indeed, beside us. Sue

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011

Thank you for reading and the generous review. Poetry doesn't come as naturally to me as some, and when I think I get it right - I feel good. Your kind remarks are appreciated. ~patty~

Comment from sweetsilversong

Excellent

This is wonderful Patty, it comes across as very sincere and heartfelt.
I like your choice of words which makes the balance of this Whitney just right.
Very enjoyable.
Best wishes.

SSS

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011

Thank you for reading and the generous review. Poetry doesn't come as naturally to me as some, and when I think I get it right - I feel good. Your kind remarks are appreciated. ~patty~

Comment from ButterflyHana

Excellent

It's a nice poem and fascinating...
Especially these lines,

- Foolish me
To think it gone -

Some reality among the girls, I suppose... ") keep up the good work...
BHana.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011

Thank you for reading and the generous review. Poetry doesn't come as naturally to me as some, and when I think I get it right - I feel good. Your kind remarks are appreciated. ~patty~

reply by ButterflyHana on 26-Jan-2011

you're welcome... ")

Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi Patty,

I really like these Whitney poems and don't know why I don't try to write one! You have made beautiful word selection and the message, while profound, is one we should all listen to. No matter how bad things are at times we must remember He is always there. Well done. Blessings, chey

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011

Thank you for reading and the generous review. Poetry doesn't come as naturally to me as some, and when I think I get it right - I feel good. Your kind remarks are appreciated. ~patty~

Comment from RADIO

Excellent

An excellent perfect timing
reminder to me. Shadows created
a deep darkness just the other
day. Put aside the fact of your
last line but I do se the light
today. Your words help.
Radio

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011

So glad I could help someone else find their way 'out of the dark.' Thank you for reading and the generous review. ~patty~

Comment from Yeti777

Excellent

First I want to say how relieved I am that you've thought better of your posting on your profile page. I, personally, would miss both your poetry and your reviews.

Second... another great piece here. Your Whitney sings in this one. The emotional sentiment is strong with your chosen words and your easy flow makes this a most satisfying read.

Thanks for hanging out with us a while longer. We are privileged to have you in our company.

Sean

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011

Sean - Thank you SO much for your kind words. I appreciate your time in reading and reviewing my work. This poem was heartfelt. Thank you. ~patty~

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Missing someone is not fatal. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011

Thank you for reading and the generous review. I appreciate your kind words. ~patty~

reply by c_lucas on 26-Jan-2011

YOu're welcome, Patty. Charlie.