My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Darkness"a collection of my poetry
89 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
The art work is great.
I guess one is lucky to have this one
true light through this night.
Maybe this might change tomorrow?
I enjoyed reading these words and written well.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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The art work is great.
I guess one is lucky to have this one
true light through this night.
Maybe this might change tomorrow?
I enjoyed reading these words and written well.
Honey tree
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review of my Whitney poem for Him. There is a double meaning - partly my husband is always there - but I know that one day he will, or could, leave when he is called to go home, but my one Savior will ALWAYS be there. He is forever. ~patty~
Comment from words
I liked your rhyming Whitney.
Your message was clear:
Where is He?
My one true Light
Right next to me through this night
He is always there ... we are the ones who forget.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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I liked your rhyming Whitney.
Your message was clear:
Where is He?
My one true Light
Right next to me through this night
He is always there ... we are the ones who forget.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Yes, we often forget that He is with us through it all. ~patty~
Comment from R. K. Alan
God is always with you, surrounding and protecting. I think I feel Him the most at night, in darkness, in the quiet of my prayer at night. Thanks for sharing. Ray aka Krylon
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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God is always with you, surrounding and protecting. I think I feel Him the most at night, in darkness, in the quiet of my prayer at night. Thanks for sharing. Ray aka Krylon
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Isn't it wonderful to KNOW He will always be there? ~patty~
Comment from Gungalo
A beautiful Whitney of hope you!!! Love your awesome imagery in this one and how you have just held out hope for all who read this one. Awesome done!!!!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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A beautiful Whitney of hope you!!! Love your awesome imagery in this one and how you have just held out hope for all who read this one. Awesome done!!!!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review, my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed this and I appreciate your kind words. ~patty~
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Deeply moving and self refective.
Silently introverted and completely believable i8n the doubts we all face.
Very nice submission.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Deeply moving and self refective.
Silently introverted and completely believable i8n the doubts we all face.
Very nice submission.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and your generous review. ~patty~
Comment from Realist101
Hi Patty! THis is lovely...great art by Linda too! I admire your faith and skill as a poet and writer, and your immense love of animals!!! HUGS...Susan
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Hi Patty! THis is lovely...great art by Linda too! I admire your faith and skill as a poet and writer, and your immense love of animals!!! HUGS...Susan
Comment Written 26-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Your kind words and remarks bring a smile to my being. ~patty~
Comment from Ovidd
I see two meanings here. Maybe that is all it takes. But I still have doubt, though that is no real matter. I get the feeling that you are talking about your dog, but the poem's title and subject matter tend to lead me elsewhere. But this is good just because a poem should always mean more than its words.
Good job!
Go with Love:)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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I see two meanings here. Maybe that is all it takes. But I still have doubt, though that is no real matter. I get the feeling that you are talking about your dog, but the poem's title and subject matter tend to lead me elsewhere. But this is good just because a poem should always mean more than its words.
Good job!
Go with Love:)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. LOL! No, I wasn't talking of Harley (for once) in the double meaning - I was referring to my husband and my Savior; one will leave me when he does, and one will ALWAYS be with me. ~patty~
Comment from stanishmichelle
The illustration is a nice setting for the poem. It is a delightful poem which has a smooth flow to it. He never left your side throughout the night, and was always there for you. .
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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The illustration is a nice setting for the poem. It is a delightful poem which has a smooth flow to it. He never left your side throughout the night, and was always there for you. .
Comment Written 26-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Your kind words are nice to read. ~patty~
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Thank you for this lovely reply. Michelle
Comment from Writingfundimension
This is just a terrific poem patty. I love the complexity of the message wrapped up in package which appears simple. I truly enjoyed this excellent offering. Best...Bev
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011
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This is just a terrific poem patty. I love the complexity of the message wrapped up in package which appears simple. I truly enjoyed this excellent offering. Best...Bev
Comment Written 26-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. Your warm remarks and comments are greatly appreciated. ~patty~
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You are most welcome patty.
Comment from bowls
Very effective contrast between the darkness of the night and the Light. This is paralleled by the fear or pain resolving into hope at the end of the poem. These opposites combine to create a very positive statement.HE is right there and has been all along. I like the way you use rhyme here - first alternating - perhaps that ties in with the contrast idea - and then a rhyming couplet - a strong, steady rhyme like the ending comment of your poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011
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Very effective contrast between the darkness of the night and the Light. This is paralleled by the fear or pain resolving into hope at the end of the poem. These opposites combine to create a very positive statement.HE is right there and has been all along. I like the way you use rhyme here - first alternating - perhaps that ties in with the contrast idea - and then a rhyming couplet - a strong, steady rhyme like the ending comment of your poem. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. Your warm remarks and comments are greatly appreciated. ~patty~
