My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Darkness"a collection of my poetry
89 total reviews
Comment from happy to be here
good for you with this verse. It makes sense and the rhythm and rhymne is good throughout. I am here for the same reason as you and would like to follow your work!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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good for you with this verse. It makes sense and the rhythm and rhymne is good throughout. I am here for the same reason as you and would like to follow your work!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Be forewarned, I write a BUNCH of stuff about my pets, but I DO write other stuff, too. Thanks for following. ~patty~
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a lovely, well done poem of faith that strikes a chord in my own spirit. It is a nice accomplishment to communicate both a flagging and a resurrected hope within these few short lines. Best regards, Jeanie Mercer
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This is a lovely, well done poem of faith that strikes a chord in my own spirit. It is a nice accomplishment to communicate both a flagging and a resurrected hope within these few short lines. Best regards, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for readingf, the generous review and your kind words. ~patty~
Comment from Majicman
You did a great job with the whitney poem style. Your message was revealing as well. I see you are an accomplished writer in all forms of writing.
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You did a great job with the whitney poem style. Your message was revealing as well. I see you are an accomplished writer in all forms of writing.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Your kind words and remarks make me smile. ~patty~
Comment from JennieClare
Yes He really is there ALL the time and very much so in the dark or our darkest moments. This Whitney is in fine form and has a great message. Thanks for sharing. Jennieclare
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Yes He really is there ALL the time and very much so in the dark or our darkest moments. This Whitney is in fine form and has a great message. Thanks for sharing. Jennieclare
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review of my Whitney. He is always with us. ~patty~
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Hallelujah! You're welcome. Jennie
Comment from Fireshadow
Patty, this is a wonderful Whitney poem where you clearly reflect your deep faith, as well as hope for better things to come. All of us live through dark moments, but the important thing is to remember that the sun will always shine - eventually. Great work, my friend.
Ama
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Patty, this is a wonderful Whitney poem where you clearly reflect your deep faith, as well as hope for better things to come. All of us live through dark moments, but the important thing is to remember that the sun will always shine - eventually. Great work, my friend.
Ama
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you SO much for reading and the generous review. He does and has gotten me through some very difficult times. ~patty~
Comment from RebelRose
The one light you can always find in the darkness. He is always there in the darkest recesses of our lives. Great Whitney poem. I enjoyed the read.
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The one light you can always find in the darkness. He is always there in the darkest recesses of our lives. Great Whitney poem. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. I'm so happy this poem is getting a very positive response. He IS alive. ~patty~
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork it is lovely.
I love this poem and the words are very up lifting. There is a message within this poem.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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I love the artwork it is lovely.
I love this poem and the words are very up lifting. There is a message within this poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed my tribute to His everlasting presence. ~patty~
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your very welcome.
Comment from Harlequin
Though I had problems connecting with the poem, it is a great poem. : ) So well done! The images are nice and the story itself is thoughtprovoking.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Though I had problems connecting with the poem, it is a great poem. : ) So well done! The images are nice and the story itself is thoughtprovoking.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and your generous review. ~patty~
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You are more than welcome! : ) Ed
Comment from skye
Great words of hope and truth in your short, succinct, well-formed poem.
Love the feeling that He will always be with us, even when we have pain and suffering. All we need is His love.
Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Great words of hope and truth in your short, succinct, well-formed poem.
Love the feeling that He will always be with us, even when we have pain and suffering. All we need is His love.
Well done.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. Yes, He WILL always be there, and it gives us the assurance we can never have with anything or anyone else. ~patty~
Comment from CodyJack
And HE will never leave you..not ever. Sometimes we think He has left us but it is us who have turned a deaf ear on Him and He is there waiting with arms extended for us to come back. Very wonderful poem and great imagery. So very true. Your friend, Cody
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And HE will never leave you..not ever. Sometimes we think He has left us but it is us who have turned a deaf ear on Him and He is there waiting with arms extended for us to come back. Very wonderful poem and great imagery. So very true. Your friend, Cody
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Cody - I just wrote a similar message to you on your latest post. I value your friendship and I'm glad you enjoy my writing. ~patty~
