My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Darkness"a collection of my poetry
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Comment from avmurray
I like short and meaningful poems. Your is a good example of that. With good rhythm and and rime you tell a whole story in just a few words. Loved to read it.
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I like short and meaningful poems. Your is a good example of that. With good rhythm and and rime you tell a whole story in just a few words. Loved to read it.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and received its message. ~patty~
Comment from daisygo
This is a nice poem with a spiritual message. Yes it is so true that through our darkness and pain God is right there beside us. Good job.
Daisy
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This is a nice poem with a spiritual message. Yes it is so true that through our darkness and pain God is right there beside us. Good job.
Daisy
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and received its message. ~patty~
Comment from Tonilynn
I love the way you went from fear, pain and relief in almost one complete sentence. It feels like a worthy prayer to be recited during hard times. Loved it.
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I love the way you went from fear, pain and relief in almost one complete sentence. It feels like a worthy prayer to be recited during hard times. Loved it.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and received its message. ~patty~
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Lovely setting the blue on blue, very calming and peacefull.The pain either physical or mental always seems stronger when darkness comes, I feel, but to know that He is with you, as you say, is very comforting. That's what I get from this read. Well done, I enjoyed the read.
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Lovely setting the blue on blue, very calming and peacefull.The pain either physical or mental always seems stronger when darkness comes, I feel, but to know that He is with you, as you say, is very comforting. That's what I get from this read. Well done, I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and received its message. ~patty~
Comment from Magics02
I loved reading this and I would love to have this on my wall. The picture and the words ring so true to me tonight and I just admire your writing friend. All of them xoxo Magics
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I loved reading this and I would love to have this on my wall. The picture and the words ring so true to me tonight and I just admire your writing friend. All of them xoxo Magics
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. If you want to print this out, and hang it on the wall, I would be honored. Your kind words bring a smile to my heart. ~patty~
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I admire this one so much and yes I will do that. You are one heck of a wonderful writer:) Love Magics
Comment from minopavlic
A powerful message certainly inspired from above, as the last line says it all. Many state they have faith, yet none exists. Unless your faith has given you that renewed heart which stands firm in the midst of severe trials, your faith then remains as empty as it's proclomation.
no_obstacle
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A powerful message certainly inspired from above, as the last line says it all. Many state they have faith, yet none exists. Unless your faith has given you that renewed heart which stands firm in the midst of severe trials, your faith then remains as empty as it's proclomation.
no_obstacle
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and received its message. ~patty~
Comment from Razz
Very pretty. So very reassuring.
A beautiful tribute to God...is how I read it and what is means to me. Flow is very smooth.
Photo is wonderful.
I love the work of SewwtLinda too.
Have a magical day.
Razz
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Very pretty. So very reassuring.
A beautiful tribute to God...is how I read it and what is means to me. Flow is very smooth.
Photo is wonderful.
I love the work of SewwtLinda too.
Have a magical day.
Razz
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and received its message. ~patty~
Comment from ejebb1951
Wow, Mustangpatty. I just love this spiritual road you're taking me on. This a beautiful poem and what you say is so true. The light said, "Never will I leave you, never will I forsake you." You remind us all of how great a God we serve. Thank you.
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Wow, Mustangpatty. I just love this spiritual road you're taking me on. This a beautiful poem and what you say is so true. The light said, "Never will I leave you, never will I forsake you." You remind us all of how great a God we serve. Thank you.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and received its message. ~patty~
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Being a spiritual person myself Mustangpatty, your work kind of reached out and pulled me in. It was my pleasure.
Comment from Amicus
This well crafted spiritually themed whitney style poem reads like the lyric to a hymn. I wonder what it would be like expanded by a verse or two and set to music? Nice way to use this interesting simple form...Well done.
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This well crafted spiritually themed whitney style poem reads like the lyric to a hymn. I wonder what it would be like expanded by a verse or two and set to music? Nice way to use this interesting simple form...Well done.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and received its message. ~patty~
Comment from mumsyone
I like your poem and the message it presents, and the picture you chose to complement it is perfect. It's always good to know that He is right beside us all the time.
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I like your poem and the message it presents, and the picture you chose to complement it is perfect. It's always good to know that He is right beside us all the time.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and received its message. ~patty~
