Nessie's Night
A fantasy Visit to Loch Ness17 total reviews
Comment from RebelRose
This has quite a catchy rhythm to it, flows along very well. Great rhyme pattern. Great photo and the poem tells a great story with a moral.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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This has quite a catchy rhythm to it, flows along very well. Great rhyme pattern. Great photo and the poem tells a great story with a moral.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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Hi Rebel Rose, I really was hoping I could pull this together and create a great poetic story. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and hope it was a fun read too. Thank you for the Great review. :o) Helvi
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
i did very much enjoy this quick and joyful poetic story. i think its wonderful fun to put ones self in a fantasy story. i would like to meet this nessie too.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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i did very much enjoy this quick and joyful poetic story. i think its wonderful fun to put ones self in a fantasy story. i would like to meet this nessie too.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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Hi LoveLifeKnight, This was a lot of fun to write and I'm very happy you enjoyed it. It really would be something to see Nessie wouldn't it? Thank you for the wonderful review. :o) Helvi
Comment from RYME4U
Very good poem. It kept my interest all the way through. I like the idea that she is friendly and the question at the end. (Is it perhaps Man who is the monster?)Well written and well rhymed. Great job!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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Very good poem. It kept my interest all the way through. I like the idea that she is friendly and the question at the end. (Is it perhaps Man who is the monster?)Well written and well rhymed. Great job!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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Hi RYME4U, Thank you so much! I know some people will skip a longer poem, so I do everything I can to make it interesting. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and moral too. Thanks again for the great review. :o) Helvi
Comment from Kelly Shackelford
What a great poem about Nessie, wh I believe exists or at least at one time did. It flowed well and had great vivid images. good luck
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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What a great poem about Nessie, wh I believe exists or at least at one time did. It flowed well and had great vivid images. good luck
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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Hi Kelly, Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I don't know if Nessie exists, but I'm open to the possibility she does. I'm very happy you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the "Good Luck Wishes" for the contest too. Helvi
Comment from Ann Smith
I enjoyed this tale of the sea. The details and images show the story clearly and I felt I was on the boat enjoying the sight as well. No one is really sure if this legend is real or make-believe. You left that door open. Good luck with the contest. ann
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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I enjoyed this tale of the sea. The details and images show the story clearly and I felt I was on the boat enjoying the sight as well. No one is really sure if this legend is real or make-believe. You left that door open. Good luck with the contest. ann
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Hi Ann, There is nothing that brings more happiness than having someone enjoy what you wrote. Thank you so much for the six star review. I'm so glad you enjoyed my story that much. I have a smile a mile long :o) Helvi
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You are welcome. :) ann
Comment from Yeti777
No need to "hope" Helvi, I did in fact enjoy. Very much, actually. This was fun and it was meaningful. Your imagery was spectacular and I could feel the rocking boat beneath me as I witnessed this amazing sight. Very, very cool post. Sean
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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No need to "hope" Helvi, I did in fact enjoy. Very much, actually. This was fun and it was meaningful. Your imagery was spectacular and I could feel the rocking boat beneath me as I witnessed this amazing sight. Very, very cool post. Sean
Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2011
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Hi Sean, I feel like I just saw Nessie again! WOW! Thank you for the incredible six star review. I'm so happy you enjoyed this! Shiver me timbers! LOL Helvi
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No problem... you deserved it. Sean
Comment from acajudy
What a charming interpretation of an age of Myth(?). I really enjoyed this read and do not have one word of criticism. You told a story in a poem that I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing this one.
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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What a charming interpretation of an age of Myth(?). I really enjoyed this read and do not have one word of criticism. You told a story in a poem that I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing this one.
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
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Hi acajudy, Thank you! I wanted this to be a fun story that everyone could enjoy. I'm glad that it had that affect on you. Warm Blessings, Helvi
