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Thinking with The Wrong Head

The screwing he gets for the screwing he got.

71 total reviews 
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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These men who don't think, have a place in your stories. I can see that you don't like them, immediately, when I read their physical description and their evil intentions. You always see to it that they get what's coming to them. Very satisfying and bound to WIN.,

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
    Hi Ralf. Thanks for the review but the contest was over years ago for this. LOL Bob :)
reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 25-Feb-2020
    I know it's been over. But you know I'm working my way through all your works.
    One at a time. Do you mind?
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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You tell this story with your own unique descriptions Bob -
His double-wide smelled like Dinty-Moore beef stew, coffee, sweat, and the vagrant vegetable odor of marijuana. - one of my favourites.Seems like everyone's in for a change. Good story and a good ending Bob, and congrats on the win.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much, dear friend. Bless you. Bob
Comment from juliaSjames
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Whoa, a double twist! Excellent write and a worthy winner. You excel at physical descriptions, Bob.

Last sentence is a terrific way to end.

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
    Thank you, Julia. I am glad you liked this one. Thanks for your time and comments. : ) Bob
Comment from Diana L Crawford
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Whoa! This was quite an ending! You have such a superb way of weaving a story. So creatively described! I can see her running in her heels and Joe smoking his stogie in the dilapidated trailer park! Excellent! :). I don't have any more "6"'s, but this is so deserving of one! xoxo

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
    Thank you, Diana. I appreciate your review as well as your virtual six. God bless you. : ) Bob
reply by Diana L Crawford on 21-Jul-2019
    Always my pleasure! Now on to read the next chapter in Jack the Ripper story!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
    Tom is a good writer. Tell him I said so, will you? : ) Bob
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
    Tom is a good writer. Tell him I said so, will you? : ) Bob
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written flash fiction starting with the door slammed ... when someone is dishonest and sleeping around with another man's wife he can expect some bad things happen. He got the surprise of his life.

Congratulations on winning the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
    Thank you, Sandra. I appreciate your time and comments. : ) Bob
Comment from Coco Jane
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Great story! The unexpected ending caps it off well.

Couple of mechanical things:
In paragraph 5, you need something stronger than a comma after Marion. Maybe use a semicolon (that's kinda formal for this story, though) or a dash.
In paragraph 9, you need a comma after hitches.
I like the juicy descriptions. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
    Thank you, Jane. Bob
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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Oh, Mastery, you sly dog:

I guess it was Marion's quest to "spread the disease as she
spread her knees" (sorry, it just came right off the keys to my
new Chrome book - I haven't had time to teach it any manners
yet)!!!

Sorry I wasn't around to vote for this, but you won anyway.
jan

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Thanks so much, Jan. Glad you got to peek at it now. Bless you my friend. : ) Bob
Comment from Tpa
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as always, your stories are very entertaining, easy to grasp, thrilled to read, your descriptions were wonderful. I liked the anorexic bullfrog and a whole lot other others. thanks for the treat.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    Hi, Tom. Haven't seen you in a while. Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it. : ) Bob
Comment from judiverse
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What a story. Despicable characters, though. A visit to Jonah's would be like slumming for Marion. Great details about the trailer and the neighborhood. Seems like the husband took a long time about deciding to leave. He ends up not fighting with Jonah but feeling sorry for him. If she has AIDS, no wonder. Maybe Jonah's fate is sealed, and no wonder he feels something uncoiling in his brain. Great story for the prompt. Lots of impact, so no wonder it won. judi

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
    Thank you, Judes. : ) Bob
Comment from dragonpoet
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Interesting story about a woman playing around. Which isn't done much. It seems she is taking out her diagnosis on the male gender because one probably gave it to her. Well Jonah finally has learned he needs to be more careful when choosing sexual partners and probably with his health in general too. I like how friendly the men were after their fist fight.
You answered the prompt well.
Keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2019

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
    Thank you, Joan. : ) Bob
reply by dragonpoet on 19-Jul-2019
    My pleasure, Bob.
    Joan
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    : ) Bob
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2019
    : ) Bob