The Box
You never walk alone48 total reviews
Comment from Lekatt
One of the most beautiful stories I have ever read and very true. When my mom was near death she told me her mother had come for her. So much love I can cry.
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One of the most beautiful stories I have ever read and very true. When my mom was near death she told me her mother had come for her. So much love I can cry.
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
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Thank you so very much for your generous 6 stars. I do believe that we are not alone at the time of our death. I am p leased you enjoyed this one.
Comment from wildchild60
It isn't often a story sends a shiver down my spine these days. I loved your take on the Christmas card box. I detected do discernible grammar or spelling errors and the story flowed nicely.
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It isn't often a story sends a shiver down my spine these days. I loved your take on the Christmas card box. I detected do discernible grammar or spelling errors and the story flowed nicely.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
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Thank you so very much. I am so pleased you liked this one.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
What a very beautiful ending to this story. Isn't it amazing what can be accomplished with very few words. I like the concept of the box, and I love the concept of an entire lifetime's friends and acquaintances escorting the good father to Heaven. Nancy
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What a very beautiful ending to this story. Isn't it amazing what can be accomplished with very few words. I like the concept of the box, and I love the concept of an entire lifetime's friends and acquaintances escorting the good father to Heaven. Nancy
Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
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Thank you so very much. I am pleased you enjoyed this one.
Comment from bowls
What a great story! It gave me goose bumps. I think it's the kind of story that works really well at this time of year. Can't you see it as a movie? I can. Anyway, nicely done. One little thing: THREW his thick gray hair should be THROUGH.
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What a great story! It gave me goose bumps. I think it's the kind of story that works really well at this time of year. Can't you see it as a movie? I can. Anyway, nicely done. One little thing: THREW his thick gray hair should be THROUGH.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
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Thanks for catching the spag. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Comment from joannesnow
This is a beautiful, well written story. How very creative and extremely thought out this story is. You use phrases like," gentle warm breeze, flow through his thick gray hair," to create an eerie sense of mystique. Totally enjoyable, wonderful Christmas story. Thank you for sharing.
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This is a beautiful, well written story. How very creative and extremely thought out this story is. You use phrases like," gentle warm breeze, flow through his thick gray hair," to create an eerie sense of mystique. Totally enjoyable, wonderful Christmas story. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2010
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Thank you so very much for your enthusiastic and positive review. I sincerely appreciate the 6 stars. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
wow, this is a great story about the final journey of this Pastor's life, it was so beautiful and so sad, a wonderful story that i enjoyed reading. i wish you the best of luck in the cotnest
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wow, this is a great story about the final journey of this Pastor's life, it was so beautiful and so sad, a wonderful story that i enjoyed reading. i wish you the best of luck in the cotnest
Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
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Thanks so much.
Comment from c_lucas
This reminded me of a hymn, "Bringing in the Sheaves." Your story is well written in the warmth of the Christian Spirit. Good luck in your contest.
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This reminded me of a hymn, "Bringing in the Sheaves." Your story is well written in the warmth of the Christian Spirit. Good luck in your contest.
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
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Thanks so much.
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You're welcome, Sasha. Charlie
Comment from lola29
Sasha, this is an outstanding piece of work. It is so comforting to know that the Father passed over with such ease and grace, and that he had people whom he had known and loved welcoming him. Bravo!
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Sasha, this is an outstanding piece of work. It is so comforting to know that the Father passed over with such ease and grace, and that he had people whom he had known and loved welcoming him. Bravo!
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2010
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Thank you very much.
