Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Golden Treasure"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
56 total reviews
Comment from Maustin
I really like the message you painted in your work. This line is very powerful: "But greater is He that dwells in you
the King of glory, lovely and true." Your work is inspirational. Good work.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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I really like the message you painted in your work. This line is very powerful: "But greater is He that dwells in you
the King of glory, lovely and true." Your work is inspirational. Good work.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for your great and wonderful review, I'm glad you liked it. With appreciation, Sarah
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You are so welcome.
Comment from boberto
Pleasure to meet you sarahice.
I must tell you, I loved your island. Was very surprised when I was there years before you were probally born. I was a young, single GI. Was in a mobile, electronic depot and flew all over that area.
English may not be your mother tongue, but you certainly captured your thoughts and feelings very well with this verse. Reads easy and flows well.
Happy Holidays,
boberto
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Pleasure to meet you sarahice.
I must tell you, I loved your island. Was very surprised when I was there years before you were probally born. I was a young, single GI. Was in a mobile, electronic depot and flew all over that area.
English may not be your mother tongue, but you certainly captured your thoughts and feelings very well with this verse. Reads easy and flows well.
Happy Holidays,
boberto
Comment Written 11-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you boberto for your wonderful review and it was great to hear you'd been in Iceland. Well, perhaps you'll have an opportunity to visit, and if you do, please let me know. With appreciation, Sarah
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Hi. Yes, and I noticed things beside the good looking women. I was surprised with the hot springs. Hows your volcano doing? I haven't seen anything in the news lately. Hope you are doing well and really have a wonderful holiday. Plus, a New Year that brings you good health.
boberto
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Hi! The volcano is fine now, lying dormant! I'm doing fine really, the Lord keeps me well! Merriy Christmas to you! Happy New year! With warmness, Sarah
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Glad to hear both--about you and the volcano. A very, very merry Christmas to you and yours.
boberto
Comment from Majicman
Your poem of love in rhyming couplets is inspiring. It has a great message for those who will open up their hearts to hear. Great work.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Your poem of love in rhyming couplets is inspiring. It has a great message for those who will open up their hearts to hear. Great work.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thaknk you for your wonderful review of my poem, so true what you say. With warm greetings, Sarah
Comment from Mustang Patty
A stunning tribute to His love and message. You have drawn a picture in words that describes how one needs to search for Him, but once He is found, His love is there - for all to take. ~patty~
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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A stunning tribute to His love and message. You have drawn a picture in words that describes how one needs to search for Him, but once He is found, His love is there - for all to take. ~patty~
Comment Written 11-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you Patty for your wonderful and encouraging review of my poem. So true what your say about His Love, With warm greetings, Sarah
Comment from c_lucas
When every man understands the truth of Christmas, then we will have peace on earth. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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When every man understands the truth of Christmas, then we will have peace on earth. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your beautiful and encouraging review. I really appreciate it. With warm greetings, Sarah
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YOu're welcome, Sarah. Charlie
Comment from gallivandog
A lovely poem providing easy reading with good rhyming flow. My favourite verse:
We must all the shadows try
the world of madness where sin is nigh
But greater is he that dwells in you
the King of Glory, lovely and true
Interprated by me as:
having the choice of free will, but no matter what we do, the King of glory will always be there to receive us
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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A lovely poem providing easy reading with good rhyming flow. My favourite verse:
We must all the shadows try
the world of madness where sin is nigh
But greater is he that dwells in you
the King of Glory, lovely and true
Interprated by me as:
having the choice of free will, but no matter what we do, the King of glory will always be there to receive us
Comment Written 11-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your wonderful review and for interpreting it so well. With warm greetings, Sarah
Comment from Gungalo
Most definitely spiritual and full of faith. Great advice and the wonder of it all is carried smoothly throughout this write. Your words are sound and these quatrains are great.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Most definitely spiritual and full of faith. Great advice and the wonder of it all is carried smoothly throughout this write. Your words are sound and these quatrains are great.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your wonderful and well expressed review. I really appreciate it. With warm greetings, Sarah
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My pleasure Sarah!!!
Comment from x-cheshire-puss-x
This is absolutely beautiful, rich with emotions that will never fade as years pass. It's also a bit haunting, like a melody you can't remember.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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This is absolutely beautiful, rich with emotions that will never fade as years pass. It's also a bit haunting, like a melody you can't remember.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for your wonderful and well expressed review of my poem. I love your last sentence about "hounting melody" and I looked it up, awesome. With warm greetings, Sarah
Comment from l.raven
This is a well written poem.And it has a rhythm and rhyme to it.The picture is just beautiful.And I for one stay close to God.I keep my faith,but admit my faith has been dented once in a while.But I go to God and we word it out.Very nice poem
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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This is a well written poem.And it has a rhythm and rhyme to it.The picture is just beautiful.And I for one stay close to God.I keep my faith,but admit my faith has been dented once in a while.But I go to God and we word it out.Very nice poem
Comment Written 11-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for your wonderful and well expressed review of my poem. I'm glad you liked it and it encouraged your faith. With warm greetings, Sarah
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
The poet has conviction, passion, inner direction and a line of expression that allows for freedom in movement of mind. Uplifting and bouncy...
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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The poet has conviction, passion, inner direction and a line of expression that allows for freedom in movement of mind. Uplifting and bouncy...
Comment Written 02-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your insight and astonishing review of my poem, it was truly moving as well as encouraging and uplifting, faith building and strengthening. Love it!
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certainly
