Those Bad Bad Bedtime Boys
A little boy blames the toy mess on others.34 total reviews
Comment from Herb
Thank you for a excellent poem. The imagery of the little boy peeping out of his duvet to catch himself is priceless. A nice well rounded and complete work.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Thank you for a excellent poem. The imagery of the little boy peeping out of his duvet to catch himself is priceless. A nice well rounded and complete work.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Thanks for the kind words and great review.
Comment from Valkarie
A concise and very well written piece of poetry which flows so well is concise and visual in content. Creative and emotional in content which is well expressed and written. An inspiring write which some of us have experienced when.
Well executed with well thought out word play which works so well. A most thoughtful and well written piece.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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A concise and very well written piece of poetry which flows so well is concise and visual in content. Creative and emotional in content which is well expressed and written. An inspiring write which some of us have experienced when.
Well executed with well thought out word play which works so well. A most thoughtful and well written piece.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 02-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your great review. I'm glad you like it.
Comment from nelias nhac
This is written from such a unique perspective. The language is witty while still maintaining a childish air. Sweet and cheeky! What A beautiful write.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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This is written from such a unique perspective. The language is witty while still maintaining a childish air. Sweet and cheeky! What A beautiful write.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
The meteoric rhyme and rhythm make for a super read. I used meteoric for the image because in a child's mind, these things are so magnified. I love it.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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The meteoric rhyme and rhythm make for a super read. I used meteoric for the image because in a child's mind, these things are so magnified. I love it.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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Thank you for the meteoric review.
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indeed.
Comment from FredCollingwood
What a great poem and even better sotry. I love that you took the time to rhyme. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Excellent!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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What a great poem and even better sotry. I love that you took the time to rhyme. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Excellent!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Nana2four
This is so fun! I have four g-sons all under the age of five. The oldest one will love this poem of yours!!! Seems he is up all hours of the night fighting off these bad bad bedtime boys also :)
Wonderfully written!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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This is so fun! I have four g-sons all under the age of five. The oldest one will love this poem of yours!!! Seems he is up all hours of the night fighting off these bad bad bedtime boys also :)
Wonderfully written!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Must be a universal invasion! Thanks for the review!
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Magic Wand,
This is a delightful story and one I enjoyed reading. Long poetry is not usually my thing but I love this one. Having raised two boys and having grandsons I can appreciate the humor. A fun read that made me smile....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Hi Magic Wand,
This is a delightful story and one I enjoyed reading. Long poetry is not usually my thing but I love this one. Having raised two boys and having grandsons I can appreciate the humor. A fun read that made me smile....blessings, chey
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for the review.
Comment from markk
Brilliant. I loved this. thanks for sharing. You've done an excellent job with writing this and imagining what goes on in a child's mind at night. so much fun!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Brilliant. I loved this. thanks for sharing. You've done an excellent job with writing this and imagining what goes on in a child's mind at night. so much fun!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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I really appreciate your words of encouragement.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a nice piece of narrative poetry that is both entertaining and instructive, especially for the young ones. YOU REALLY DID A GREAT JOB WITH THE RHYMES. KUDOS
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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This is a nice piece of narrative poetry that is both entertaining and instructive, especially for the young ones. YOU REALLY DID A GREAT JOB WITH THE RHYMES. KUDOS
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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I appreciate your encouragement. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Connie P
Having raised two sons and having three grandsons, I can relate. We had those messy culprits on a regular basis. I loved your poem, it is entertaining and well written.
Notes:
*"It wasn't me"" I begin to stutter(extra quotation mark)
*But who'll believe ME,I'm just a kid? (space)
Connie
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Having raised two sons and having three grandsons, I can relate. We had those messy culprits on a regular basis. I loved your poem, it is entertaining and well written.
Notes:
*"It wasn't me"" I begin to stutter(extra quotation mark)
*But who'll believe ME,I'm just a kid? (space)
Connie
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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thanks for the corrections. Every bit helps to make a better piece. And thank you for the review.
