If The Jester Cried At Night
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "The Winter Rose"A collection of favourite poems by mrgrunty.
48 total reviews
Comment from Scissor handz
Ah, Grant is a lover boy. I love these poems, so bright and happy, and romantic. And I love winter so this one gets and A+.
Scissor
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Ah, Grant is a lover boy. I love these poems, so bright and happy, and romantic. And I love winter so this one gets and A+.
Scissor
Comment Written 31-Dec-2004
Comment from Elliesbiggestfan
This is lovely, a very personal feel to it, this is one of those pieces that makes me feel like a peeping Tom (well a girl one anyway lol) as it seems to be a personal reference, shared with us nosey lot,
"Petals were not yet unfurled,
it curled into a ball.
Your naked beauty glowing,
it shimmered off the wall"
Just one of the lovely stanza's you have here, but I think my favourite one, such beautiful descriptions you have used in this piece, just lovely....
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This is lovely, a very personal feel to it, this is one of those pieces that makes me feel like a peeping Tom (well a girl one anyway lol) as it seems to be a personal reference, shared with us nosey lot,
"Petals were not yet unfurled,
it curled into a ball.
Your naked beauty glowing,
it shimmered off the wall"
Just one of the lovely stanza's you have here, but I think my favourite one, such beautiful descriptions you have used in this piece, just lovely....
Comment Written 27-Oct-2004
Comment from Marc
The poem read well, the emotions came through clearly. I liked it, and can imagine your joy at finding that rose left there by someone you had been missing.
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The poem read well, the emotions came through clearly. I liked it, and can imagine your joy at finding that rose left there by someone you had been missing.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2004
Comment from Analyst
You are one of those teddy bear guys.
This poem was sweet and I hope every birthday,
a person in their birthday suit is waiting for you.
It sounds like you enjoyed it.
Nice poem.
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You are one of those teddy bear guys.
This poem was sweet and I hope every birthday,
a person in their birthday suit is waiting for you.
It sounds like you enjoyed it.
Nice poem.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2004
Comment from Tempesta
Wow, that was very sensual. When read aloud it didn't trip at all, but flowed smoothly. Creative fuel comes to life in long cold winter months! Great expression!
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Wow, that was very sensual. When read aloud it didn't trip at all, but flowed smoothly. Creative fuel comes to life in long cold winter months! Great expression!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2004
Comment from JustJenny
awe what a sweet and slushy poem, I love it! What a nice surprise indeed, what better a birthday present than the one you love.
well written, great flow and rhyme, not much else to say on this one!
Great stuff.
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awe what a sweet and slushy poem, I love it! What a nice surprise indeed, what better a birthday present than the one you love.
well written, great flow and rhyme, not much else to say on this one!
Great stuff.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2004
Comment from dianphillips
Awww how sweet. But a little sexy at the same time. Very romantic too. Be careful or you'll have the lovebirds pilfering this for their sweethearts!
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Awww how sweet. But a little sexy at the same time. Very romantic too. Be careful or you'll have the lovebirds pilfering this for their sweethearts!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2004
Comment from Lilyk
A nice delicate and bittersweet one you have here Grant. Not as adventurous with imagery and language as I usually expect in your work but still a poem with heart:)
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A nice delicate and bittersweet one you have here Grant. Not as adventurous with imagery and language as I usually expect in your work but still a poem with heart:)
Comment Written 10-Oct-2004
Comment from Dell
Mmm so captive,
I could only find praise for this one, so much for the creative fuel of longing
It awarded you a perfect little gem ,
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Mmm so captive,
I could only find praise for this one, so much for the creative fuel of longing
It awarded you a perfect little gem ,
Comment Written 10-Oct-2004
Comment from Willow Moon
Grunty, such a delightful piece. To the point, simple; yet full of so much feeling. The use of the imagery is romantic and visually. The structure and flow just add to the enjoyment.
Namaste, Willow
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Grunty, such a delightful piece. To the point, simple; yet full of so much feeling. The use of the imagery is romantic and visually. The structure and flow just add to the enjoyment.
Namaste, Willow
Comment Written 10-Oct-2004
