Pet Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Inside Mufasa's head"...musings on the pets I've had
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Comment from judy corcoran
cool poem... i really enjoyed it, and after reading your little explanation i re-read it and enjoyed it even more... brought a smile to my face... thank you
judy
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2010
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cool poem... i really enjoyed it, and after reading your little explanation i re-read it and enjoyed it even more... brought a smile to my face... thank you
judy
Comment Written 20-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading this and the generous review; Mufasa is a funny little cat, and currently he is terrorizing my two cats as they are living with him and my son while I'm in Europe -- in 3 weeks, I will be reunited with my kitties, boys, and hubby!! Hurrah! (But I will miss my daughter incredibly.)
Comment from Betinka
though the words tell of what goes on inside the cat's head it emerges very much the owner's thouhts...a little imaginativ flight of imagination is lacking. something dtartling is expected- was given evidentallybut censeredso its not the author's fault Has possibilities of developing interestingly. BTKA
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2010
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though the words tell of what goes on inside the cat's head it emerges very much the owner's thouhts...a little imaginativ flight of imagination is lacking. something dtartling is expected- was given evidentallybut censeredso its not the author's fault Has possibilities of developing interestingly. BTKA
Comment Written 09-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your review; I will work on coming up with more startling things in Mufasa's next musings.
Comment from Valkarie
I sure there is conflict at times between the your cats as they are such unusual animals, I know I have one.
A creative and well written poem concise with a good flow and most visual. An impeccable write that is well planned out and has an artistic expression making your poem most creative.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2010
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I sure there is conflict at times between the your cats as they are such unusual animals, I know I have one.
A creative and well written poem concise with a good flow and most visual. An impeccable write that is well planned out and has an artistic expression making your poem most creative.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 09-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading and your generous review. I greatly appreciate your remarks.
Comment from Nana2four
This is really cute!
Ever since the Lion King movie, it's a common thing around our house to say Mufassa when we like what someone says :)
Hope you do well on the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2010
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This is really cute!
Ever since the Lion King movie, it's a common thing around our house to say Mufassa when we like what someone says :)
Hope you do well on the contest!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2010
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Nana2four; thank you for taking the time to read this little story about Mufasa - his name was taken to "fit in" with my other kitties - Simba and Leo. Whenever, I have multiple cats in the house, I tend to name them something that goes together. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Comment from KayteeF
I just so love cats.
Your poem has me smiling at Mufasa's musings.
I used to have three cats, now down to one, but Tom and Jerry were always the bosses. Aged 17 and 17and 1/2 the twins died within the last year.
Your poem has me smiling at the memories it brings of my precious boys and their antics.
Thank you for the trip down memory lane.
Our little Smurfett seems to have taken all the foibles of the boys. Now she is on her own she wont let a cat go through our garden without a challenge.
They are strange creatures.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2010
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I just so love cats.
Your poem has me smiling at Mufasa's musings.
I used to have three cats, now down to one, but Tom and Jerry were always the bosses. Aged 17 and 17and 1/2 the twins died within the last year.
Your poem has me smiling at the memories it brings of my precious boys and their antics.
Thank you for the trip down memory lane.
Our little Smurfett seems to have taken all the foibles of the boys. Now she is on her own she wont let a cat go through our garden without a challenge.
They are strange creatures.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2010
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Thank you for reading, and the awarded stars. I'm glad that this little story brought happy memories for you. I'm sure that Tom and Jerry are up in kitty heaven smiling down on their little sister, Smurfett. Thank you for sharing with me about them.
Comment from psalmist
Cute little poem about the musings of a put-upon cat. For the most part, my cats ignore each other. I like how you described the personalities of the different kitties. It made me smile just imagining their antics. A fun read.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2010
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Cute little poem about the musings of a put-upon cat. For the most part, my cats ignore each other. I like how you described the personalities of the different kitties. It made me smile just imagining their antics. A fun read.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my little poem. Mufasa, Simba, and Leo are all characters in my ongoing series about cats.
Comment from honeytree
The art work is great and yes I wonder what would be going on in Mufasas head.
Cats can become jealous or they may welcome other cats to play with.
I enjoyed reading very much.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2010
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The art work is great and yes I wonder what would be going on in Mufasas head.
Cats can become jealous or they may welcome other cats to play with.
I enjoyed reading very much.
Honey tree
Comment Written 09-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2010
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Thank you, Honey tree. The photo is actually of the real Mufasa, my grand kitty. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. ~Patty~
