The White Fairy
Poem of Love and Spirit15 total reviews
Comment from Valkarie
This is a wonderfully written poem so inspiring with a powerful and visual description that flows so well. Your poem
Is expressive and most creative has a good balance of word play and is most creative making for a very creative write.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2010
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This is a wonderfully written poem so inspiring with a powerful and visual description that flows so well. Your poem
Is expressive and most creative has a good balance of word play and is most creative making for a very creative write.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 07-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2010
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Thank you Valkarie for reviewing my second poem, really appreciate it. With best regards Sarah
Comment from Gungalo
I love this and the format you used to pen it in. Not the usual and it fits with the description of your girl. A standout write that is in tribute to her.
Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2010
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I love this and the format you used to pen it in. Not the usual and it fits with the description of your girl. A standout write that is in tribute to her.
Well done.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2010
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Thank you Gungalo for your very nice review, really lovely!
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My pleasure poet!!!
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Thanks again!! I love beaches, swimming in the warm sea and running on the sea shore. So wonderful!
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Then you'd love it here on the island of St. Thomas, Virgin Islands, where I like. This is truly paradise girl!!!
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Cool, can't wait!
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MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
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Sounds cool, but can you clarify? What does this really mean? ...
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It means I like it. LOL.
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LOVE IT! Something to dream about...need a miracle...believe in it...
Comment from sweetthanesue
very nice rhyming flowing poetry. It is spiritual, uplifting and sweet The last verse has a lovely ending and is beautifully written. very pleasant reading...
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2010
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very nice rhyming flowing poetry. It is spiritual, uplifting and sweet The last verse has a lovely ending and is beautifully written. very pleasant reading...
Comment Written 07-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2010
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Lovely and encouraging and very happy you find my poem uplifting and beautifully written. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Comment from llaliberte
Well done, you captured the story here very well, I love the picture and how it brings it all together, you have a gift here, keep it going and I cannnot wait to see more of your work. keep writing
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2010
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Well done, you captured the story here very well, I love the picture and how it brings it all together, you have a gift here, keep it going and I cannnot wait to see more of your work. keep writing
Comment Written 07-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your great and helpful review, and yes the picture fits the subject very well. Thank you for encouraging me to write more.
Comment from CodyJack
A nice imagery to help us see this wonderful fairy of love that gives and takes care of us and whispers I love you in our ears. That's how I picture a guardian angel taking care of us. Great poem and pleasant feelings. Cody
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2010
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A nice imagery to help us see this wonderful fairy of love that gives and takes care of us and whispers I love you in our ears. That's how I picture a guardian angel taking care of us. Great poem and pleasant feelings. Cody
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2010
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Hi! Cody. Thank you for your insight and understanding into my poem, and I'm so pleased to hear it affected your spirit in a positive and loving ways.
