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No Sh--, There I Was

Story of an embarassing moment

26 total reviews 
Comment from m-alexander
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I laughed so hard at this, I couldn't believe this was your choice of topic. I'm working on an engineering product and we're actually trying to create a new fall monitor (basically a better one). Glad to know that privacy's a concern. That's incredibly funny. Very well written, I loved it!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
    Thank you for your kind review. It wasn't funny at the time, but now I find it hilarious!
Comment from Ann Smith
Excellent
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I enjoyed your story because of the humor you satuarated it with. I know this experience wasn't pleasant at the time, but we all have gone through moments like this, well not quite like this, but you know what I mean. The details and images tell the story well. Exactly how long did that dye stay on your hair? Welcome to fanstory. I'm sorry about your car accident. My husband has been in two serious car accidents so I understand what you mean about depression. ann

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
    The dye was on my hair for an hour instead of 30 minutes. My hair didn't seem to suffer any ill effects. It didn't seem funny at the time-glad I can laugh about it now!. Thank you for the review and your kind words.
Comment from wiccgypsy1
Excellent
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This story had humor and everyday human frailty in it. You took this person's disability, showed their independence and strength, then their human frailty. Great job!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
Excellent
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this is very well written, i enjoyed your humorous story. i am glad you shared it with us. glad you didn't over process you hair waiting for help to show up.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
    Thank you kindly for the review!
Comment from Gungalo
Excellent
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What a story. Seems that if anyone can laugh at themselves after something like this, it's a wonderful thing. I loved the human nature of this write.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
    This is a true story and seems funny now but not at the time! Thank you kindly for the review.
reply by Gungalo on 06-Nov-2010
    My pleasure, I bet it wasn't funny then at all.
Comment from hfriscia
Excellent
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This is an interesting and enjoyable story to read...I saw no mistakes in this piece...A very creative story about a childhood, don't all wish problems could just go away with the touch of a button...

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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2010


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
    Thank you kindly for your review!