Dreams Can Come True...
Exquisite and mouth-watering chocolate40 total reviews
Comment from IndianaIrish
Knowing your "fondness" for chocolate, I was delighted to read your entry for this contest, Carol. How can anyone read this and not have their mouth water?? Best wishes in the contest!
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Knowing your "fondness" for chocolate, I was delighted to read your entry for this contest, Carol. How can anyone read this and not have their mouth water?? Best wishes in the contest!
Indy :>)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Karyn,
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment..I apologize for my delay in thanking you..Carol
Comment from ladybird
That's it, you've done it now!I'll have to buy chocolate, and when i'm trying to lose some weight. Mind you, I only have some once a week. This piece of writing is so descriptive, it's made my mouth water. Love the artwork.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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That's it, you've done it now!I'll have to buy chocolate, and when i'm trying to lose some weight. Mind you, I only have some once a week. This piece of writing is so descriptive, it's made my mouth water. Love the artwork.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Chocolate..You better hurry because I probably scooped it all up already. Smiles, Carol
Comment from misscookie
Just looking at the artwork
I gained five pounds.
That is a lot of information good to know for the hoildays. thanks foe sharing. And the education. His is a good write.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Just looking at the artwork
I gained five pounds.
That is a lot of information good to know for the hoildays. thanks foe sharing. And the education. His is a good write.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Thank you...Thank you..Thank you, my friend.
As always I appreciate your comments.
Smiles, CArol
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It was my pleasure.
Comment from melyuki
now if i was the chocoholic that we know I am not, I would be stomping down the hallyway right now on my way to purchase this delectable yummy chocky .. but as I am not, I am going to fly down the hallyway, into the choco factory and buy all the products for the one whom I know is the chocoholic here, and so beward, I am on the way. open the doors clear the floor area, and watch out. here I come and I want all the chocolate in the factory for my big sis. you see, she is the chocoholic and I want the lot, right now.. thanks so much sis for sharing this chocoholic advertisemnet . I am sure i will be purchasing seconds, in no time... luv ya gripping yarn .... hugs from mel xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx your little sis.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
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now if i was the chocoholic that we know I am not, I would be stomping down the hallyway right now on my way to purchase this delectable yummy chocky .. but as I am not, I am going to fly down the hallyway, into the choco factory and buy all the products for the one whom I know is the chocoholic here, and so beward, I am on the way. open the doors clear the floor area, and watch out. here I come and I want all the chocolate in the factory for my big sis. you see, she is the chocoholic and I want the lot, right now.. thanks so much sis for sharing this chocoholic advertisemnet . I am sure i will be purchasing seconds, in no time... luv ya gripping yarn .... hugs from mel xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx your little sis.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
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You are a nut..so watch out or they will sweep you up and put you in one of their sweet confectionaries...Thank you, ole dear one...Smiles and hugs, Sis
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oooh crunchy nut chocolate might even suck me in for just a small piece of two.. yummmmmmmmm
Comment from FredCollingwood
Where have you been? I haaven't seen you around for a while. This is another of your great stories. Your drool is excused.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Where have you been? I haaven't seen you around for a while. This is another of your great stories. Your drool is excused.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Thank you...Thank you..Thank you, my friend.
As always I appreciate your comments.
Smiles, CArol
Comment from --Turtle.
I was wondering how this would be done, and I think you did a swell job with this. Perfect for you, as you have a knack for the real, emotional outreach, appeal in your writing. I enjoyed reading this, and I don't even like advertisements.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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I was wondering how this would be done, and I think you did a swell job with this. Perfect for you, as you have a knack for the real, emotional outreach, appeal in your writing. I enjoyed reading this, and I don't even like advertisements.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Thank you...Thank you..Thank you, my friend.
As always I appreciate your comments.
Smiles, CArol
Comment from Belinda
Mmmm, you've got me persuaded to try Aigner's chocolates. My mouth is already watering as I read your lines, ending with the attractive and convincing last paragraph. I think the company will use this ad as theirs ... :)
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
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Mmmm, you've got me persuaded to try Aigner's chocolates. My mouth is already watering as I read your lines, ending with the attractive and convincing last paragraph. I think the company will use this ad as theirs ... :)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
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Belinda,
Thanks for the wonderful review and best wishes..It would be "sweet" to win..Smiles,Carol
Comment from Sasha
You definitely got my mouth watering with this one. Great entry for this fun contest. I sincerely wish you all the best. You made me want to check out their website. I have my fingers crossed for you. Very good work with this one.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
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You definitely got my mouth watering with this one. Great entry for this fun contest. I sincerely wish you all the best. You made me want to check out their website. I have my fingers crossed for you. Very good work with this one.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
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Sasha,
Thanks for the best wishes and the kind review. It certainly would be "sweet" to win..lol Smiles, Carol
Comment from redrider6612
Nice work on this tough challenge. You've incorporated most of the stuff they provided. One little detail you might want to check: it's a bit confusing, but I believe Pia is Peter's wife, not John's. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
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Nice work on this tough challenge. You've incorporated most of the stuff they provided. One little detail you might want to check: it's a bit confusing, but I believe Pia is Peter's wife, not John's. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
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redrider,
I appreciate the heads up on Pia..thank you. Thank youfor the stopping by to read and comment. smiles, Carol
Comment from RKagan
This is really really a great advertisment for this company. I think they would buy it. You did an excellent job with this. I think you could write ads for a living if you wanted to. great job.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
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This is really really a great advertisment for this company. I think they would buy it. You did an excellent job with this. I think you could write ads for a living if you wanted to. great job.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
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RKagan
Thank you so much for the encouragement and support..Smiles, Carol
