Emotions of Love and Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 115 "Quiet Please!"Love and Life with many emotions
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Comment from richard7
nothing to == too.
nothing to do
nothing too exciting.
:-)
bummer eh!
or I'm the waking creep!
I have that same problem, behind 2 walls in my corner house are neighbours and i enjoy listening to computer radio and writing through the night, can't be the neighbourhood rowdy tho eh?!
Nice and simple clear to understand gripe(!) that other readers will associate with for sure!.
nice poem
late night owls are best!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2010
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nothing to == too.
nothing to do
nothing too exciting.
:-)
bummer eh!
or I'm the waking creep!
I have that same problem, behind 2 walls in my corner house are neighbours and i enjoy listening to computer radio and writing through the night, can't be the neighbourhood rowdy tho eh?!
Nice and simple clear to understand gripe(!) that other readers will associate with for sure!.
nice poem
late night owls are best!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2010
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Thanks Richard7 for taking the time to read my write. Yes I agree late owls are the best!! Take care friend of the poet world.
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You too!
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork
It's perfectfor tur poem
As I was eading your poem I couldn't help from smiling and nodding my head with total agreement. for I have worked those hours also.
this is a good write.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2010
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I love the artwork
It's perfectfor tur poem
As I was eading your poem I couldn't help from smiling and nodding my head with total agreement. for I have worked those hours also.
this is a good write.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2010
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Thank You for your kind words. Glad you could relate! Have a wonderful day.
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You get some sleep, have a blessed day.
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I'm on lunch I work third shift! Thanks anyway.
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I didn't know ifthere was a time difference,well when you get home and get settle have and go sleep if possiable. it was hard for me to just take a shower and go to sleep.
Comment from Cooper Watt
Hahaha.... Totally reminds me of my life a few years back.... I worked on a fishing boat. I'd get up at 4AM each day and creep out of the house.... My wife hated it, I loved it. Eventually I had to get a new job for I love my wife more. Thanks for invoking some sincerely memories for me. All the best, Coop.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Hahaha.... Totally reminds me of my life a few years back.... I worked on a fishing boat. I'd get up at 4AM each day and creep out of the house.... My wife hated it, I loved it. Eventually I had to get a new job for I love my wife more. Thanks for invoking some sincerely memories for me. All the best, Coop.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind words and I'm glad I brought back memories for you that means I did my job as a good poet. Thank you! Take care and I'm glad you love your wife more then the fishing job. I can relate to that also maybe that will be my next write! Thank You again.
Comment from Paulpl52
A nice little poem with a good style of couplet verses. Nice art work to enjoy. My only nit is the last stanza should be 'their' beauty sleep. Still warrants a worthy five. Blessings, Paul.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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A nice little poem with a good style of couplet verses. Nice art work to enjoy. My only nit is the last stanza should be 'their' beauty sleep. Still warrants a worthy five. Blessings, Paul.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2010
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Thank you for catching that spelling error, I have since fixed it. Thank You have a nice day :)
