A Long Winter's Night
a crossbreed dog survives20 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork
and it is perfect for your story.I love the movement of the story how the wolf had to move on to survire.
there is a strong message within this story. do you see it.
this is a good write.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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I love the artwork
and it is perfect for your story.I love the movement of the story how the wolf had to move on to survire.
there is a strong message within this story. do you see it.
this is a good write.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Yes, ") "Don't give up." You are a wise and wonderful friend Cookie. Thank you dear one. It is always so nice to know your thoughts. On many things. Love, Susan
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I'm sure you would do the same for me.
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I would try. ") Luv, S.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I enjoyed this little story so much. Once I started reading it carried me through to the end. You have painted great characters in the dog and the man.
Giddy
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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I enjoyed this little story so much. Once I started reading it carried me through to the end. You have painted great characters in the dog and the man.
Giddy
Comment Written 23-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Hi there Giddy!! Thank you very much! I am super happy you liked this story. And took a minute to review for me too! Thanks again!! Susan
Comment from Carrie Smith
Hey there, I was caught up in this story from the very first. Sad at first, but gradually that little hint of hope slipped in. Great descriptions throughout. These two had both had cold, dark winter nights - I think often the beginning of a bonding of one to another. Nice one,Suse!LOL...Susan
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Hey there, I was caught up in this story from the very first. Sad at first, but gradually that little hint of hope slipped in. Great descriptions throughout. These two had both had cold, dark winter nights - I think often the beginning of a bonding of one to another. Nice one,Suse!LOL...Susan
Comment Written 23-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Hi Susan! Thank you! I'm happy you liked this. It was a bit long, but I had some wanting to know about the left behind dog. I thought of poor Spook too, as I wrote this. And a couple of the dogs we have taken in. Who knows, what they have to go thru, being unwanted and alone. Take care Susan! Luv, Susan
Comment from c_lucas
Lniliness and the need for a companion has brought about many strange relationships. This is very welly wrltten with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Lniliness and the need for a companion has brought about many strange relationships. This is very welly wrltten with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2010
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Hi Charlie, thank you again!! It always makes me happy to see you here and hear what you think of my efforts. Happy Sunday Charlie. Susan
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You're welcome, Susan. Charlie
Comment from anne1204
Great story to continue the one about the old woman. I like a story that gives to all character. Very good storytelling. I love the picture. Anne 1204
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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Great story to continue the one about the old woman. I like a story that gives to all character. Very good storytelling. I love the picture. Anne 1204
Comment Written 23-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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Hi Anne! Thank you! I had to save the old dog. Another fan was upset! Bless her heart. Lots of animal lovers here, me included. I am so happy you liked this one too! Happy weekend Anne!! Susan
Comment from humpwhistle
Susan there is always so much of yourself in your stories. That is where the truth lies. This is an extension of a story you wrote a couple of days ago. I'm glad you went back and saved the dog. Writing from the dog/wolf's perspective is tricky and you did a great job.
Just two nits: "mistress" doesn't sound right. Later he thinks of her as the "human", that sounds earthier to me.
This one is probably stupid, but his longing for "dog" food
also made me a little uncomfortable. Listen, you probably know how to think like a cross better than I do, still I thought I'd mention. All that said, this is good follow up on the wolf's story, and a good chance to write a new one---the man's story.
I hope I made some sense. Lee
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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Susan there is always so much of yourself in your stories. That is where the truth lies. This is an extension of a story you wrote a couple of days ago. I'm glad you went back and saved the dog. Writing from the dog/wolf's perspective is tricky and you did a great job.
Just two nits: "mistress" doesn't sound right. Later he thinks of her as the "human", that sounds earthier to me.
This one is probably stupid, but his longing for "dog" food
also made me a little uncomfortable. Listen, you probably know how to think like a cross better than I do, still I thought I'd mention. All that said, this is good follow up on the wolf's story, and a good chance to write a new one---the man's story.
I hope I made some sense. Lee
Comment Written 23-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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Hi Lee! Yes, you did! I will certainly go make amends. This is the beauty of FS...real help! ") I hadn't thought of going on, I will see how this does? Thank you very much Lee. I appreciate your time and help! ") Susan
Comment from Wolfwind
Wow! I am so sorry I didn't read your story sooner. I do not have six stars left or I would've rated you with six. What a wonderful story. I love wolves, have pictures of them all over the house. I also had a wolf hybrid until he died a couple of years ago. He was the best dog I've ever had.
Your story was very touching. I will be looking for more from you.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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Wow! I am so sorry I didn't read your story sooner. I do not have six stars left or I would've rated you with six. What a wonderful story. I love wolves, have pictures of them all over the house. I also had a wolf hybrid until he died a couple of years ago. He was the best dog I've ever had.
Your story was very touching. I will be looking for more from you.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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Wow, thank you so much! If you would like, read the first part of this, "The End Of The Lane"? I love wolves too, and always wanted a hybrid. I am sorry yours is gone. I hope you have lots of photos to remember him by? ANd thank you for the thought of a six. That is very kind of you! When I am feeling better I will read some of your work too! ") Susan
Comment from BethShelby
This is an excellent little story. I love animal stories with happy endings. The dog in this crossbreed was stronger than the wolf in the end. Your story telling skills amaze me. I always enjoy them.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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This is an excellent little story. I love animal stories with happy endings. The dog in this crossbreed was stronger than the wolf in the end. Your story telling skills amaze me. I always enjoy them.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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Hi Beth, thank you so much! I am told I need dialogue, but sometimes, well, a lot, I just tell too much. But that's me, I guess. I am so glad you enjoy it tho. Blessings to you and yours my friend. Luv, Susan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I wish I had a six left for this story. It deserves one. I really enjoyed the story, especially the fact it had a happy ending. My family swears I love anything that furry and has four feet and a tail.
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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I wish I had a six left for this story. It deserves one. I really enjoyed the story, especially the fact it had a happy ending. My family swears I love anything that furry and has four feet and a tail.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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") Well, bless your heart, I do remember that you said too, that they will not allow you in a room full of free kittens or puppies! I'm that way, it's just impossible to resist the cuteness...but they grow up all to quickly. I am happy you love pets. I do too. This story was because Judian James was so sad at the ending of the first half of this. She too, loves animals and was worried about the old dog being left behind. Thank you Barbara...it's great to hear from you! I would like to PM you here in a minute if that's okay? Susan
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Not a problem. I am trying to decided on what sticks out the most in my next post to search for artwork.
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Susan,
Nice job.
Good descriptions.
Entertaining.
Interesting.
Suspenseful.
Great ending.
I like your stories.
Katie
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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Susan,
Nice job.
Good descriptions.
Entertaining.
Interesting.
Suspenseful.
Great ending.
I like your stories.
Katie
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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Hi Katie! Thank you very much! This took a lot longer than I thought it would, so this great review is greatly appreciated!! It's always wonderful to hear from you my sweet friend. Luv, Susan
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You're welcome Susan,
great to hear from you too.
luv,
katie
