Alphabetic cruelty!
Life Without the Letter S20 total reviews
Comment from richard7
Well done, you made a neat verse with centred on S even tho it aint there!
Nice rhyme clear to read and a good hunour to it.
Not easy with a missing letter.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Well done, you made a neat verse with centred on S even tho it aint there!
Nice rhyme clear to read and a good hunour to it.
Not easy with a missing letter.
Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from psalmist
What a cute little poem. It has a great rhyme scheme and flows smoothly. This made me smile the whole way through. Great entry.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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What a cute little poem. It has a great rhyme scheme and flows smoothly. This made me smile the whole way through. Great entry.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thank you
Comment from MumEsGirl
absolutely brilliant response to the contest. I toyed with the idea of entering, but no matter what that little letter kept appearing in my writing.
This should do very well and I wish you luck with it
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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absolutely brilliant response to the contest. I toyed with the idea of entering, but no matter what that little letter kept appearing in my writing.
This should do very well and I wish you luck with it
hugs
kate
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Wow! Six stars AND hugs as well! Thank you.
Comment from markk
This was absolutely brilliantly written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. You have said much more than I would have thought possible without the letter S and also made a great poem about it too. well done.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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This was absolutely brilliantly written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. You have said much more than I would have thought possible without the letter S and also made a great poem about it too. well done.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thank you - it was challenging!
Comment from livingwords
Very creative. Shades of Ogden Nash. Great rhyming and meter. A simple, cute idea perfectly executed. :) I would like to read more of your work.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Very creative. Shades of Ogden Nash. Great rhyming and meter. A simple, cute idea perfectly executed. :) I would like to read more of your work.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Hey, I'm the new Ogden Nash - what a compliment!
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"I think that I shall never see,
A billboard lovely as a tree..."
Comment from Father Flaps
Dear Mystery Poet
I enjoyed reading your poem about the missing letter.
"Doth creative output fetter"... great line!
But my favorite line is,
"A rule that cruel I can't believe"
Good ending as well... "My poetry will never thrive with an alphabet of twenty-five!"
Good luck in the contest!
cheers
Kimbob
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Dear Mystery Poet
I enjoyed reading your poem about the missing letter.
"Doth creative output fetter"... great line!
But my favorite line is,
"A rule that cruel I can't believe"
Good ending as well... "My poetry will never thrive with an alphabet of twenty-five!"
Good luck in the contest!
cheers
Kimbob
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thank you - it was challenging but fun!
Comment from l.raven
very well written.And still has a good rhythm to it.But I couldn't do with out s words.I use it way to many times.But the poem was fun to read.And I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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very well written.And still has a good rhythm to it.But I couldn't do with out s words.I use it way to many times.But the poem was fun to read.And I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thank You!
Comment from annettebda
I never saw a single s, even under duress I could not confess to seeing a single s. Well done and I hope this does superbly and that success will be just one of your many rewards!
Annette
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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I never saw a single s, even under duress I could not confess to seeing a single s. Well done and I hope this does superbly and that success will be just one of your many rewards!
Annette
Comment Written 20-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Ha ha. Thank you!
Comment from Trybuck
Looks like your concentration paid off. A very neat poem without the letter s. That 26th letter sure comes in handy, Well done, Buck
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Looks like your concentration paid off. A very neat poem without the letter s. That 26th letter sure comes in handy, Well done, Buck
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thanks.
Comment from JMRoland
Hi Mystery Writer,
This clever, humorous poem satisfys all of the rigid requirements of the contest, and tickles my funnybone besides. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
JMR
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Hi Mystery Writer,
This clever, humorous poem satisfys all of the rigid requirements of the contest, and tickles my funnybone besides. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
JMR
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thank you!
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You're welcome. Too bad I can't spell "satisfies".Lol.
JMR
