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Comment from marcii
This is a very good story. I think we would like to all go back and tell our child self a thing or two.
I liked the way that you didn't tell the child-self to change anything but told her that she would have battles to fight though she would get through them and become a better person for it.
A really interesting story.
Good luck in the contest.
Marcii
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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This is a very good story. I think we would like to all go back and tell our child self a thing or two.
I liked the way that you didn't tell the child-self to change anything but told her that she would have battles to fight though she would get through them and become a better person for it.
A really interesting story.
Good luck in the contest.
Marcii
Comment Written 17-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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marcii,
Thankyou for the kindness and support. I appreciate it very much. Smiles, Carol
Comment from newbeginning
What an insightful, thoughtful look at oneself! Beautifully written. I can tell you've gained so much wisdom through your experiences. Not only that, but you are able to express it. Love this story.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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What an insightful, thoughtful look at oneself! Beautifully written. I can tell you've gained so much wisdom through your experiences. Not only that, but you are able to express it. Love this story.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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newbeginning,
Great name and idea...starting over when ones stumble is sometimes difficult but necessary..We can find a brighter future. Thanks so much. Smiles, Carol
Comment from rivki1111
Hi, the prompt did a good job of bringing out the writer in you (^_^)
I especially liked the way you finished, turning lemons into lemonade. The story is sad in places, but so is life.
A very appropriate whispering, cheers, rivki.
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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Hi, the prompt did a good job of bringing out the writer in you (^_^)
I especially liked the way you finished, turning lemons into lemonade. The story is sad in places, but so is life.
A very appropriate whispering, cheers, rivki.
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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rivki,
Thank you for the kind review and support. Carol
Comment from essence56
Good work and advice. However, it's alot for a young child to install, so you know we will repeat ourselves over and over before it sinks in. They learn through experience and consequences. Good work
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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Good work and advice. However, it's alot for a young child to install, so you know we will repeat ourselves over and over before it sinks in. They learn through experience and consequences. Good work
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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essence,
Thank you for the kind review and support. Carol
