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Love and Life with many emotions

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Comment from TT7Z
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Yes courting styles are now almost nonexistent. There is no chivalry left any more. Just a lustful selfishness that seems to permeate our societies social norm. There is something to be said to 'getting to know all about someone' before 'getting someone'. Just hopping into the sack leaves out such romance, wonder, and of course the intimacy of each others companionship. Very well worded and stated clearly for all to understand. Nice piece. Thank you.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2010
    Thank you for your kind review and understanding of situation at hand. Have a wonderful day
Comment from misscookie
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nice photo
It goes well with your poem. Before I comment your poem inspired me to write something thank you.I hope you get a chance to read it soon.
I love the flow of your poem and your words are so true. This is agood write.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2010
    Thank you for your kind words as always and I'm glad I also inspired you to write more. That is a privledge within itself. Thank You
reply by misscookie on 14-Oct-2010
    Good bless you, And you're very welcome take care
Comment from NiagaraFreelance
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I really enjoyed the message of this poem and the courage of the writer in going against the prevalent modern attitude to dating. I like the couplet format for this poem as it gives the poem a brisk flow. Should "old fashion" be "old fashioned"? A nice poem!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2010
    Thank you for your kind words of wisdom and I will consider your suggestion. Thank you have a wonderful day.
Comment from Irene D. Garces
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You are absolutely right. Keep time in dating, knowing more about one's partner. This is the old-fashioned way. Now, in modern times, partners do the mating at once. Others got married even if they had not fully known each other. Then when hardships came, they divorced at once...

Wonderful message and wonderful artwork too. Is that you and your partner? You're both beautiful..

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2010
    These days veryone wants it now even sex. Thats to bad as sex is somthing special that two are to share between each other and to get it right off the bat there is no more specialness to it and all you want is someone else to find that specialness again. To me what fun is there in that. I like to build the excitment up first a long process but well worth it in the end. Well have a ice day. Thank you for your comments.
reply by Irene D. Garces on 18-Oct-2010
    Thanks too for sharing such a beautiful piece... expecting more from you...
    irene