Comment from TT7Z

Excellent

Well done. Nice rhyme and meter. Excellent message in story line. Nice reminder that we are never really alone, just sometimes lonely. Best leave stew for the pot, and walk it off the rest. Nicely done. Thank you.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2010

Thank You for the wonderful words of wisdom toward this write. They are greatly appreciatd. Thank You

Comment from psalmist

Excellent

Very nice. I enjoy walking alone, also. Although, as you said so eloquently, I am not alone. I do some of my best praying walking with God. A simple and devout poem.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2010

Thank you. I do my best praying also alone that is what inspired me to write this one. Thank you have a wonderful walk next time round may it be a peaceful as the last one.

Comment from richard7

Excellent

It is a nice pondering walk.
Even tho God is there to talk to and enjoy the day with.
Holding hands and laughing with someone is okay too eh!
nice thanks.

PS; i liked the first version better!
:-)
cool thanks.
i will have a smile in mind when i go for a bike ride alone.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2010

Thank You, Thank You I didn't realize that somehow this poem was doubled on fan story. I have since corrected it. Please take anothere look and see if it is better theay it is suppose to be. Thanks again for the catch and being honest about your review. Thank You