Comment from TT7Z

Good

Nice piece, well written, good rhyming, a bit redundant in a few spots. Good flow easy read though story line was mixed around a bit. Otherwise a good piece. Thank you.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2010

Thank you for the time and review. Have a wonderful day.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like this pem very much you have written t well I lik how tou explain why God gave ustheses seaon ,and how we adjust to them.
I love the fow of the poem This is a very refreshing poem

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2010

Thank You for your kind words. I'm glad you find it very refreshing. :)

Comment from Magics02

Excellent

I am just loving your beautiful scenery and your images your writes are leaving me with. Such a graceful poem here with all the seasons mentioned. Kudos to you!! Magics:)

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2010

Thank You for your kind words. They are greatly appreciated.

Comment from Ann Smith

Excellent

I like the idea of the seasons being a toy for us to enjoy. What a neat idea. I also like the couplet format as it slows down the poem to give the reader time to soak in each thought. Seasons is a good metaphor for life. We need to enjoy it as well. ann

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2010

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010

Thank you for your gracious compliments. Please read some of my other writings also. You may find them as enjoyable. Thank You again