Whispers in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Dance to the Beat --by JAMES"Brook's best lead dog is struck deaf
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Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
Overall it missed some spices of thrill, however the dialogues were quite crispy and enjoyable.
"That should work, Brook. One will fit in my sled and the other in yours." He gently unfastens the harness on Blackie and carries him to my sled.
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Overall it missed some spices of thrill, however the dialogues were quite crispy and enjoyable.
"That should work, Brook. One will fit in my sled and the other in yours." He gently unfastens the harness on Blackie and carries him to my sled.
[[ nice ones]]
K
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thanks for your comments and review.
