Emotions of Love and Life
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Comment from TT7Z
You have captured the essence of sensual touching very well. All to often couples forget how to communicate with just simple touch. Nothing in depth just a passing sweep of the hand, or peck on the cheek to say they care as they pass by each other, for no other reason. It shows an intimacy that only comes when two soulmates meet. The touch completes the meeting, expresses the feeling, and reaffirms a commitment to carry on the relationship. Very well written, expressed, and captured. Only flaw is perhaps you could have made four line stanzas instead of two for ease of readability. Excellent piece.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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You have captured the essence of sensual touching very well. All to often couples forget how to communicate with just simple touch. Nothing in depth just a passing sweep of the hand, or peck on the cheek to say they care as they pass by each other, for no other reason. It shows an intimacy that only comes when two soulmates meet. The touch completes the meeting, expresses the feeling, and reaffirms a commitment to carry on the relationship. Very well written, expressed, and captured. Only flaw is perhaps you could have made four line stanzas instead of two for ease of readability. Excellent piece.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thank you for understanding my point exactally. Your words are wonderful and very well received. I Thank you for the six star rating these are very hard to come by. Thank you again!
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what you have expressed it the touch of compassion of a soulmate, once you experiance that NOTHING ELSE will ever do or matter as much as THAT TYPE of touch. Soulmates are out there just very uncommon and not often appreciated unless by another soul mate. I know and understand the depths you speak. Ever vigelant of its return, the touch! The look! The kiss! The intmate bonding! and ah yes The bliss! calm waters await the soulmates ..... well ya I think I understand your writng. Welcome to the deep end, as time goes on the deeper it gets.
Comment from richard7
have past with ... i like this double meaning word when it is used in poetry and the like.
passed the test.
past the hectic times.
i think anyway and wonder will another?
i like the flow through the whole piece and you paint a good picture of how feelings are so important touch.
i cannot find any fault and i like how the sentences rhyme.
thanks nice read.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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have past with ... i like this double meaning word when it is used in poetry and the like.
passed the test.
past the hectic times.
i think anyway and wonder will another?
i like the flow through the whole piece and you paint a good picture of how feelings are so important touch.
i cannot find any fault and i like how the sentences rhyme.
thanks nice read.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thank you I'm not sure if your confused or understand what I have written by your review but I'm glad you came to the conclusion it was a nice read. Thank You and have a wonderful day! :) Angel
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it reads in your poem... have past with.
passed the test.
past the hectic times. = same thing.
past is past tense passed is present and past!
both mean passed!
confused,,wait till you see tonights episode of SOAP!
is this the meaning of the line is my question?
well written.
thanks.
curious to know
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I got ya now. Thank you for clairifying for me. reading the other reviews kind of through me off. Thank you for your understanding.
Comment from Gungalo
Gosh Angel, I'm surprised by this one. Touch is very important but there are many ways to touch. The physical touch is not always the touch that is needed. When my man touches me while he's away ... with his voice ... his spirit ... and his soul, I am melted with happiness.
Don't get me wrong, your write is wonderful and will touch readers.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Gosh Angel, I'm surprised by this one. Touch is very important but there are many ways to touch. The physical touch is not always the touch that is needed. When my man touches me while he's away ... with his voice ... his spirit ... and his soul, I am melted with happiness.
Don't get me wrong, your write is wonderful and will touch readers.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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I have communication and touch together in this write which I don't think you totally caught that by your review. These are the most important ingredients in love two people could have besides God in there lives. This is what I was stressing. Thank you for your kind words and insight. Have a wonderful day:)
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Have you never had your soul touched by another soul? That's what I was getting at, not merely communications. Sigh. Thanks you.
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
You and I deserve only the best
As God has put us through such a awful test
Now that we have past with the flying colors of love
We can sit pretty in God's white clean glove!
]]This you and I...is a great phrase and drives into powerful intense feelings]]..
Well done
K
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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You and I deserve only the best
As God has put us through such a awful test
Now that we have past with the flying colors of love
We can sit pretty in God's white clean glove!
]]This you and I...is a great phrase and drives into powerful intense feelings]]..
Well done
K
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind words and yes I do agree and you are right this was to be powerful. Thank you for reading my write. Please look into my other writings for more intense feelings. Thank you.
