Emotions of Love and Life
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Comment from TT7Z
Very well put and done. Your experience was a delight to learn that 'you are not the only one' having such a sense of adventure as they move. From my experience, whether you hire professionals or just rely on friends both are about the same. Noone listens. Everyone wants to sit down on the job. Someone just bugs you to no end. Yet you are the only one who still has any clue where, when, why, or what is going on enough to be careful with your stuff.
You have captured much very well, Excellent work, well done. Thank you.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Very well put and done. Your experience was a delight to learn that 'you are not the only one' having such a sense of adventure as they move. From my experience, whether you hire professionals or just rely on friends both are about the same. Noone listens. Everyone wants to sit down on the job. Someone just bugs you to no end. Yet you are the only one who still has any clue where, when, why, or what is going on enough to be careful with your stuff.
You have captured much very well, Excellent work, well done. Thank you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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I am delighted you can relate so well to my writting. As I am sure many others can too! Thank you for the kind words. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from Soulester
Hello, Angel Debbie, You nailed it with this one. Anyone who has had to move with the help of friends has experienced the exhaustion, irritations, and celebration you describe in "Moving Day". Suggestions: Helper's (Helpers); Your going (You're going). Thanks for bringing back fond memories! Mary
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Hello, Angel Debbie, You nailed it with this one. Anyone who has had to move with the help of friends has experienced the exhaustion, irritations, and celebration you describe in "Moving Day". Suggestions: Helper's (Helpers); Your going (You're going). Thanks for bringing back fond memories! Mary
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind words I will also check into my errors thank you for bringing them to my attention. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from misscookie
I had to smile what a story I have been there and done that more times than I wish to remember. I love the movement of the poem and you expressing step by step. I felt it with you.
this is a good write.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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I had to smile what a story I have been there and done that more times than I wish to remember. I love the movement of the poem and you expressing step by step. I felt it with you.
this is a good write.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Thank You for your kind words and I believe alot of people feel the same way as we do as I don't think anyone has stayed in one place for to long. Thank you again for the kind words.
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Your so right. take care.
Comment from anabelle
Great post. I've moved many times in the last ten years, and you've captured the absolute truth of how it feels. Although I see you're moving out on your own? Congratulations. It's a big step.
One nit: Your (you're) going.
Regards,
anabelle
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Great post. I've moved many times in the last ten years, and you've captured the absolute truth of how it feels. Although I see you're moving out on your own? Congratulations. It's a big step.
One nit: Your (you're) going.
Regards,
anabelle
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Fixed the nit and this was my experience when I first moved out of parents house to my own apartment many many years ago. Thank you for your kind comments.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gungalo
Oh I've been there and know exactly what you mean. But, when all is said and done, it's friends like those you'll hang onto forever.
Your write is kind of rough and could use some work but I'm pretty sure you just got it out there and that matters not. So exasperating ... to more.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Oh I've been there and know exactly what you mean. But, when all is said and done, it's friends like those you'll hang onto forever.
Your write is kind of rough and could use some work but I'm pretty sure you just got it out there and that matters not. So exasperating ... to more.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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This was my experience when I first moved out of parents house to my own apartment many many years ago. Thank you for your kind comments.
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Thank YOU for the fun write!!!
Comment from Justa Begina
Hi Angel, this poem truly depicts a typical moving day, all the hassle and stress that comes with it and then ultimate satisfaction when all is done and you can indulge yourself with a glass of wine. You described the theme perfectly and as i read your poem i felt it flow so smoothly .You had good use of rhyme throughout too, and you captured the funny side too. A joy to read ! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Hi Angel, this poem truly depicts a typical moving day, all the hassle and stress that comes with it and then ultimate satisfaction when all is done and you can indulge yourself with a glass of wine. You described the theme perfectly and as i read your poem i felt it flow so smoothly .You had good use of rhyme throughout too, and you captured the funny side too. A joy to read ! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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This was my experience when I first moved out of parents house to my own apartment many many years ago. Thank you for your kind comments.
