Emotions of Love and Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 81 "Michael"Love and Life with many emotions
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Comment from misscookie
What a beautifully poem to a friend so so many years. I told have a fiend of 35 years and she is my sister in Christ. We talk a lot on the phone due to my illness I can't travel like I wish. Debbie, your friend, my friend have something money can't bye.and alot of people wish they had. this is great **********************
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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What a beautifully poem to a friend so so many years. I told have a fiend of 35 years and she is my sister in Christ. We talk a lot on the phone due to my illness I can't travel like I wish. Debbie, your friend, my friend have something money can't bye.and alot of people wish they had. this is great **********************
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Don't I know it Or should I say don't WE know it. Thank you for your kind words I hope to have you for a friend that long!!!
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If God says the same you will. take care. Your confused friend Cookie
Comment from richard7
still friends .. great!
a friend who is a real friend is never far away.i like your structure and style and the flow is good to the eye.
a nice picture that brings across close and far and distance of time the rhyme is continual too.
nice to have friends like this!
His name at the beginning is a defining opening line even should it be the title!
thanks
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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still friends .. great!
a friend who is a real friend is never far away.i like your structure and style and the flow is good to the eye.
a nice picture that brings across close and far and distance of time the rhyme is continual too.
nice to have friends like this!
His name at the beginning is a defining opening line even should it be the title!
thanks
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Thank you for the kind words, Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Ann Smith
The love you have for your friend comes through the details and images in your poem. I like the couplet format because it is simple and direct. That is the way a true friendship should be. I was wondering in the second line if the word 'know' should be 'though.' In the next line you have the word know(ing) again. Also, I think just the word (California) shore would be okay for the place. Just a thought. ann
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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The love you have for your friend comes through the details and images in your poem. I like the couplet format because it is simple and direct. That is the way a true friendship should be. I was wondering in the second line if the word 'know' should be 'though.' In the next line you have the word know(ing) again. Also, I think just the word (California) shore would be okay for the place. Just a thought. ann
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Thank you for the kind words, Have a wonderful day.
