Our Golden Girl
A champion in every sense of the word!29 total reviews
Comment from Jnetgame
Great story. Not only is this well written, but it has an important message that sports are not just about winning and losing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Great story. Not only is this well written, but it has an important message that sports are not just about winning and losing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Thank you, Jnetgame. Yes, she is indeed a remarkable and humble young lady. I hope life will be kind to her, as she is to others. Warmest regards.
Comment from c_lucas
Quite an achievement for a pre-teen. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Quite an achievement for a pre-teen. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Thank you, she is indeed a remarkable and humble young lady. I hope life will be kind to her, as she is to others. Warmest regards.
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You're welcome.
Comment from essence56
I found this to be a very good story and liked it alot. I found it to be touching. Flow and connection was evern. The character and events were on point. Very good
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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I found this to be a very good story and liked it alot. I found it to be touching. Flow and connection was evern. The character and events were on point. Very good
Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Thank you. Yes, she is indeed a remarkable and humble young lady. I hope life will be kind to her, as she is to others. Warmest regards.
Comment from humpwhistle
Your granddaughter sounds like a remarkable young lady, and you have every right to be proud of her. And of yourself.
You tell a very personal story with restraint and forbearance. What's more you champion the heart of the champion above her sports accomplishments. Good luck, I think you're a champion, too.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Your granddaughter sounds like a remarkable young lady, and you have every right to be proud of her. And of yourself.
You tell a very personal story with restraint and forbearance. What's more you champion the heart of the champion above her sports accomplishments. Good luck, I think you're a champion, too.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Thank you, Lee. Yes, she is indeed a remarkable and humble young lady. I hope life will be kind to her, as she is to others. Warmest regards.
Comment from Shirley B
What a wonderful write. I could feel your excitement. I felt like cheering. There is nothing like pride that we have for our children and our grandchildren. best of luck to you in the contest, Shirley
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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What a wonderful write. I could feel your excitement. I felt like cheering. There is nothing like pride that we have for our children and our grandchildren. best of luck to you in the contest, Shirley
Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Thank you, Shirley. Yes, she is indeed a remarkable and humble young lady. I hope life will be kind to her, as she is to others. Warmest regards.
Comment from adewpearl
That is what I want to do, Mummy - add comma for direct address
Marijke, what a lovely story about your hard-working, talented and kind granddaughter who wanted so much to win but did not want to lord it over her friends. I love your spirit, too, that she would make you just as proud had she lost every race :-) Good luck in this Sports essay contest. Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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That is what I want to do, Mummy - add comma for direct address
Marijke, what a lovely story about your hard-working, talented and kind granddaughter who wanted so much to win but did not want to lord it over her friends. I love your spirit, too, that she would make you just as proud had she lost every race :-) Good luck in this Sports essay contest. Brooke :-)
Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Thank you, Brooke. Yes, she is indeed a remarkable and humble young lady. I hope life will be kind to her, as she is to others. I have fixed that snag - thanks. Warmest regards.
Comment from Trybuck
A heart warming story of hard work and success without letting it go to one's head. You should be very proud of your grandaughter and of course her parents as well. Remember the apple doesn't fall far from the tree.
Well done, Buck
I did notice a few typos as I'm sure you were typing in a hurry.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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A heart warming story of hard work and success without letting it go to one's head. You should be very proud of your grandaughter and of course her parents as well. Remember the apple doesn't fall far from the tree.
Well done, Buck
I did notice a few typos as I'm sure you were typing in a hurry.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Thank you so much, Buck, for reading and sharing in the life of an amazing young lady. So young, so wise, so focussed! I'll go and check those typos - yes, it did rush this! Warmest regards.
Comment from Soledadpaz
What a lovely and heartwarming story. And what a little grown-up you have in your granddaughter, thinking of her teammates like that, not wanting to rub it in. She is a gentle soul. Both my daughters and son swam competitively; it is hot in those stands but you forget in your excitement.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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What a lovely and heartwarming story. And what a little grown-up you have in your granddaughter, thinking of her teammates like that, not wanting to rub it in. She is a gentle soul. Both my daughters and son swam competitively; it is hot in those stands but you forget in your excitement.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Thank you so much for reading and sharing in the life of an amazing young lady. So young, so wise, so focussed! Warmest regards.
Comment from 239matthew
What a great human interest story that takes the reader right to the action. You can almost hear the crowd and feel the pride over flowing for a loved one. Good luck in this contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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What a great human interest story that takes the reader right to the action. You can almost hear the crowd and feel the pride over flowing for a loved one. Good luck in this contest.
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Thank you so much for reading and sharing in the life of an amazing young lady. So young, so wise, so focussed! Warmest regards.
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Your so very welcome.
