Emotions of Love and Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "Winter"Love and Life with many emotions
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Comment from TT7Z
Great imagery, I can just picture some kids throwing snow as well as packing snow on the snowperson. Then a yell from the door to call them in. Then to a kitchen scene where kids are all with cocoa mustaches telling excitedly the events of the day. Next image is kids asleep in there beds as mom closes the door saying her prayer. Any parent that has had kids, snow, and hot cocoa, can relate to your piece. Very well written. hmmm... now where's that hot chocolate.... Thank you.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2010
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Great imagery, I can just picture some kids throwing snow as well as packing snow on the snowperson. Then a yell from the door to call them in. Then to a kitchen scene where kids are all with cocoa mustaches telling excitedly the events of the day. Next image is kids asleep in there beds as mom closes the door saying her prayer. Any parent that has had kids, snow, and hot cocoa, can relate to your piece. Very well written. hmmm... now where's that hot chocolate.... Thank you.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2010
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Thank You TTZ7 Loved your remarks, Have a wonderful day!
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
this is a sweet, uplifting poem, filled with love. i enjoyed reading it. we dont have a lot of know where i live but i'm really looking forward to sweatshirts and hot chocolate!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2010
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this is a sweet, uplifting poem, filled with love. i enjoyed reading it. we dont have a lot of know where i live but i'm really looking forward to sweatshirts and hot chocolate!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2010
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Thank You for your kind words, And have a wonderful day!
Comment from misscookie
I believe there are still children taught by parents how to have a good time with out spending a lot of money especial inj the snow. those who don't are missing out of a lot of un.
yopur poem brought back happy memories.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2010
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I believe there are still children taught by parents how to have a good time with out spending a lot of money especial inj the snow. those who don't are missing out of a lot of un.
yopur poem brought back happy memories.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2010
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Thank You for your kind words, And have a wonderful day!
Comment from InterestingRon
I loved this cheerful poem. I used to live in South Africa and we once had a freak snow storm. My daughter had never seen snow before in her life and I had a perfect excuse to relive my childhood with snowball fights and snowmen etc. I could almost taste that hot chocolate in your lovely words. Thanks for a treat. Ron
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2010
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I loved this cheerful poem. I used to live in South Africa and we once had a freak snow storm. My daughter had never seen snow before in her life and I had a perfect excuse to relive my childhood with snowball fights and snowmen etc. I could almost taste that hot chocolate in your lovely words. Thanks for a treat. Ron
Comment Written 16-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2010
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Thank You for your kind words, And have a wonderful day!
Comment from chita
You have great artwork and good arthor notes--you have a good flow with your poem and give good description--you write of how children enjoy the snow and hot chocolate and go to bed--great job
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2010
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You have great artwork and good arthor notes--you have a good flow with your poem and give good description--you write of how children enjoy the snow and hot chocolate and go to bed--great job
Comment Written 16-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2010
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Thank You for your kind words, And have a wonderful day!
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You're welcome:))
