Emotions of Love and Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "Time"Love and Life with many emotions
4 total reviews
Comment from bd shutterspeed
You so Know this is worth the 5's You found my bucket of time! I am so proud! . Thank You! I love what it says, Well done on your part. Hope the picture does well for this, it is pretty much what I meant. Thanks again , Bev bd shutterspeed.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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You so Know this is worth the 5's You found my bucket of time! I am so proud! . Thank You! I love what it says, Well done on your part. Hope the picture does well for this, it is pretty much what I meant. Thanks again , Bev bd shutterspeed.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you for its use glad you approve!
Comment from TT7Z
Poem well done sort of. Message is clear and succinct. Authors notes are not totally reflective of poem. Live for the moment? Out of norm for this writer. Good stretch for new avenue ventures. Nice piece. Thank you.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Poem well done sort of. Message is clear and succinct. Authors notes are not totally reflective of poem. Live for the moment? Out of norm for this writer. Good stretch for new avenue ventures. Nice piece. Thank you.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Thank You for your comments and ye it is out of my norm for writing!
Comment from misscookie
This artwork is perfect for your poem.
Your words may upset some but,
your just for real. You're making the reader know life is really to short.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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This artwork is perfect for your poem.
Your words may upset some but,
your just for real. You're making the reader know life is really to short.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you Misscookie, yes life is to short, we must make the best of the time we do have. Thank you for your nice comments.
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Yo're very welcome.
Comment from rudywalsh
''The time we have to share is little'' I think you were trying to say, becouse ''Time we have share is to little'' is not proper English.
Nice poem though with a grand rhyming scheme through-out, great presentation with the watches and nicely created.
Very good indeed, thanks for sharing...Rudy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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''The time we have to share is little'' I think you were trying to say, becouse ''Time we have share is to little'' is not proper English.
Nice poem though with a grand rhyming scheme through-out, great presentation with the watches and nicely created.
Very good indeed, thanks for sharing...Rudy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you for the tidbit of info, you were right I did have bad English I since have corrected it. Thank you for your kind words and help, this was gretly appreciated.
