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Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Go Back to Childhood Days"Variety of Old and fun Poems
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Comment from Amyna
So true, we should never lose that spark. We would all be happier, thus making the world a happier place. What a happy thought...
Loved this. Thank you.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2010
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So true, we should never lose that spark. We would all be happier, thus making the world a happier place. What a happy thought...
Loved this. Thank you.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2010
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I just got home, am learning to walk, using walkier and wheelchair, hope to be back soon, lol
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Hi Grace.I am really so happy to know you are getting better. Hope to see you back on FS very soon.
My sincere apologies for not having been in touch. While I was in India before I came to Uk, my computer broke down. Got myself a new laptop but have been travelling. Just came from Portugal and France.
You have been in my thoughts and prayers always.
Love and hugs, Amyna
Comment from Soledadpaz
What a lovely picture you chose, Grace. Angelheart is the best. I love your poem about childhood days. Sometimes you do wish you could go back and have the carefree days you had back then. But, I don't think we ever let go of the child within us.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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What a lovely picture you chose, Grace. Angelheart is the best. I love your poem about childhood days. Sometimes you do wish you could go back and have the carefree days you had back then. But, I don't think we ever let go of the child within us.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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thank you so much for reading
Comment from R. K. Alan
My school days were horrible, except university. I would hate to go back and relive those times. But you are right in saying, never let the spirit of youth die. Keep that flame burning. Ray aka Krylon
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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My school days were horrible, except university. I would hate to go back and relive those times. But you are right in saying, never let the spirit of youth die. Keep that flame burning. Ray aka Krylon
Comment Written 12-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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you are so right, thank you for reading
Comment from Nanashirley
I loved the picture as well. The poem is nice and is easy to read and flows well. I agreed with the sentiment. It was done in a nice style and I saw no need for editing.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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I loved the picture as well. The poem is nice and is easy to read and flows well. I agreed with the sentiment. It was done in a nice style and I saw no need for editing.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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thank you so much
Comment from Readywriter52
Your portrayal of childhood is very charming. Childhood for some children is full of dreams and enchantment. Adults should fight to see that all children can enjoy their childhoods.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Your portrayal of childhood is very charming. Childhood for some children is full of dreams and enchantment. Adults should fight to see that all children can enjoy their childhoods.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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thank you
Comment from missy98writer
wierdgrace,
your free verse is beautifully written. Gorgeous art work of Angelheart's you've used. Your free verse brought back memories of childhood. I like the first stanza and the last line the best. It's a delight to read your lovely poetic art.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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wierdgrace,
your free verse is beautifully written. Gorgeous art work of Angelheart's you've used. Your free verse brought back memories of childhood. I like the first stanza and the last line the best. It's a delight to read your lovely poetic art.
Melissa.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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thank you so so mcuhf
Comment from misscookie
What can refreshing and up lifting poem
love the flow of the poem and for many there are happy memories. But mine were few to none. And since the stroke It has been erased from my memory bank. Only to day I had flash backs of something that happen in my life and I was so sorry to remember them. But God is s good God, I don't for the life of me know what they were now. What ever happy memories I have they were with my children when they were babies and growing up. I thank God many years ago that I wrote some of the happy and fun times and things down that we share.''I didn't mean to carry on so- I'm sorry.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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What can refreshing and up lifting poem
love the flow of the poem and for many there are happy memories. But mine were few to none. And since the stroke It has been erased from my memory bank. Only to day I had flash backs of something that happen in my life and I was so sorry to remember them. But God is s good God, I don't for the life of me know what they were now. What ever happy memories I have they were with my children when they were babies and growing up. I thank God many years ago that I wrote some of the happy and fun times and things down that we share.''I didn't mean to carry on so- I'm sorry.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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thank you so so much
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I'm not sure If I replyed on this any way Your the best.
Comment from gramalot8
Wierdgrace, I absolutely loved this poem. I wish I had a six and I'd give it to you. What a beautiful picture you paint of the wonderment of what we see through our childlike eyes. Thanks for sharing with us.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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Wierdgrace, I absolutely loved this poem. I wish I had a six and I'd give it to you. What a beautiful picture you paint of the wonderment of what we see through our childlike eyes. Thanks for sharing with us.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2010
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wow, you are the best
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your poem. I wish we could all go back to the innocence of childhood. Life was so much easier and the world looked so much better.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2010
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I wish we could all go back to the innocence of childhood. Life was so much easier and the world looked so much better.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2010
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me too, hope you are feeling okay, my prayers are still with you
