Breast Cancer Journey
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Diagnosis: Breast Cancer"My journey through breast cancer.
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Comment from JeJo
Cancer is not a funny disease at all. My aunt had to go through chemo and she hated it, to be blunt.
But I like that you have a community of writers and fans, friends and family who encourage and uplift you, help you through this hard period. I enjoyed how you pointed out the ironic events in your life as well. Your poem shows the courage of your faith and beliefs, as well as the strength of your spirit in face of pain.
I have a few suggestions, if you want:
I would put this line "Webster's College Dictionary, second edition." in parenthesis.
I'm facing but for the rest of my fans I'll bring - I'm facing, but for the rest of my fans, I'll bring
friends and family the strength - family, the strength
I enjoyed how you try to search for the positives, although there might be few. You have a great essay, serious, but adding a little humor. I hope your next surgery goes well. All the best, JeJo
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Cancer is not a funny disease at all. My aunt had to go through chemo and she hated it, to be blunt.
But I like that you have a community of writers and fans, friends and family who encourage and uplift you, help you through this hard period. I enjoyed how you pointed out the ironic events in your life as well. Your poem shows the courage of your faith and beliefs, as well as the strength of your spirit in face of pain.
I have a few suggestions, if you want:
I would put this line "Webster's College Dictionary, second edition." in parenthesis.
I'm facing but for the rest of my fans I'll bring - I'm facing, but for the rest of my fans, I'll bring
friends and family the strength - family, the strength
I enjoyed how you try to search for the positives, although there might be few. You have a great essay, serious, but adding a little humor. I hope your next surgery goes well. All the best, JeJo
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kindness. I will check those areas out.
Comment from JW
What a touching story. My heart goes out to you for being so brave in such adversity. May God continue to be with you and you will definitely be in my thoughts and prayers.
Jonathon
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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What a touching story. My heart goes out to you for being so brave in such adversity. May God continue to be with you and you will definitely be in my thoughts and prayers.
Jonathon
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kindness. I wrote hoping others would realize they too have inner strength.
Comment from Bridge
A moving piece. I would have been happier if it was pure fiction but unfortunately it is not. I have a 21 month old son and can empathise upto a point.My best wishes for 16th Sept. Will keep you in my prayers
Shetu
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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A moving piece. I would have been happier if it was pure fiction but unfortunately it is not. I have a 21 month old son and can empathise upto a point.My best wishes for 16th Sept. Will keep you in my prayers
Shetu
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kindness. I wrote this hoping others would realize they too have inner strength.
Comment from gerry26
You are thought of daily and prayed for. God is good and your are a good person. That means in the end everything will be good. Have faith and you will be fine. You have a tough road to travel, but I believe God is walking beside you holding your hand and saying. Believe.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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You are thought of daily and prayed for. God is good and your are a good person. That means in the end everything will be good. Have faith and you will be fine. You have a tough road to travel, but I believe God is walking beside you holding your hand and saying. Believe.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kindness. I wrote hoping others would realize they to have inner strength to draw on.
Comment from lucyanne1977
Wow what a piece of writing. This was a really hard hitting piece. I would say I enjoyed reading it however that doesn't sound right with it being about cancer. Good luck and I wish you the very best for the up coming day on the 16th.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Wow what a piece of writing. This was a really hard hitting piece. I would say I enjoyed reading it however that doesn't sound right with it being about cancer. Good luck and I wish you the very best for the up coming day on the 16th.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kindness. I wrote this hoping others would realize they too can find the strength to fight battles.
Comment from countess gram
This extremely well written story is heartfelt and emotional that brought tears to my eyes. Your well chosen words are poignant and truly amazing. I don't know if I could have written this if it were me in that situation. You will be in my thoughts and prayers. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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This extremely well written story is heartfelt and emotional that brought tears to my eyes. Your well chosen words are poignant and truly amazing. I don't know if I could have written this if it were me in that situation. You will be in my thoughts and prayers. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kindness. I wrote this hoping others would realize they too have strength.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Cancer cannot control me.
Jesus is my Lord and Savior.
Amen - my dear friend - God is good
and is listening - both my heart and
prayers go out to you.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Cancer cannot control me.
Jesus is my Lord and Savior.
Amen - my dear friend - God is good
and is listening - both my heart and
prayers go out to you.
Margaret.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kindness. I wrote hoping others would realized they too have strength.
Comment from Amicus
Sorry to read of your illness and surgical ordeals, Barbara, but glad to hear the strong note of faith and of the flock of positive friends you have to support your fighting spirit in your battle. Your poem is moving and your prose piece enlightening and inspiring...Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Sorry to read of your illness and surgical ordeals, Barbara, but glad to hear the strong note of faith and of the flock of positive friends you have to support your fighting spirit in your battle. Your poem is moving and your prose piece enlightening and inspiring...Good luck to you.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kindness.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
First, let me say that you are in my prayers and will be through this next phase. Second, let me say that it is brave of you to set it out this clearly and in this detail, but that is probably the best way to face it and to deal with it.
I shall be thinking of you on the 16th.
Patrick
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Hi Barbara,
First, let me say that you are in my prayers and will be through this next phase. Second, let me say that it is brave of you to set it out this clearly and in this detail, but that is probably the best way to face it and to deal with it.
I shall be thinking of you on the 16th.
Patrick
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you Patrick, for your kindness. I wrote this hoping others would realize they too can find the strength to fight these battles.
Comment from the blue pixel
You say that strength found you rather than you found the strength yourself and I believe you are under selling yourself in this regard. Strengh most definitely hsa come to you through your own efforts and yes, thanks to your wonderful support network, your own strengh is even further strengthened. As for you not considering yourself a poet? I disagree. Your free verse says many things, not so much about cancer, but about your exemplary character "Cancer cannot cripple my love, I feel loved more each day". This my friend, is poetic art and though it is sad to read of your future for the next five years, it was wonderful for me to hear that you are still talking of a future which proves you are a fighter. Often, there are challenges in our lives that mean we need to re-define what is normal for us and I know that you will find your way and establish a healthier you. I am not religious, though Jewish and very proud to be, but may I add all my good wishes and thoughts to all those precious people you have around you. You are a very courageous and strong woman who has inspired me to live a better life. You are a poet. I will be thinking of you. The Blue Pixel...aka Carol
You can add another contintent to your list as this new friend of yours, me, lives in Australia.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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You say that strength found you rather than you found the strength yourself and I believe you are under selling yourself in this regard. Strengh most definitely hsa come to you through your own efforts and yes, thanks to your wonderful support network, your own strengh is even further strengthened. As for you not considering yourself a poet? I disagree. Your free verse says many things, not so much about cancer, but about your exemplary character "Cancer cannot cripple my love, I feel loved more each day". This my friend, is poetic art and though it is sad to read of your future for the next five years, it was wonderful for me to hear that you are still talking of a future which proves you are a fighter. Often, there are challenges in our lives that mean we need to re-define what is normal for us and I know that you will find your way and establish a healthier you. I am not religious, though Jewish and very proud to be, but may I add all my good wishes and thoughts to all those precious people you have around you. You are a very courageous and strong woman who has inspired me to live a better life. You are a poet. I will be thinking of you. The Blue Pixel...aka Carol
You can add another contintent to your list as this new friend of yours, me, lives in Australia.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kindness. I wrote this hoping to inspire others to find their strength so they can fight their battles whatever they may be.
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I know you will be successful in your mission and I wish you all the luck in the world. Carol
