Emotions of Love and Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Wonders of God"Love and Life with many emotions
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Comment from TT7Z
Well done. Good selection of picture to go with poem. Good rhyming. Your message is easy to understand. Nice piece in more ways than one.;) Thank you.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2010
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Well done. Good selection of picture to go with poem. Good rhyming. Your message is easy to understand. Nice piece in more ways than one.;) Thank you.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind words. It was fun to write.
Comment from misscookie
Beautiful artwork, I love how you poem flows just like the clouds you are writing about. Your words are so gentle just the way God created them to be
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2010
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Beautiful artwork, I love how you poem flows just like the clouds you are writing about. Your words are so gentle just the way God created them to be
Comment Written 01-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind words. They are greatly appreciated.
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You are very welcome, take care.
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You are very welcome take care,
Comment from chita
You have a good flow with you poem and good artwork--this is an encouraging poem and something that we all can look forward to--I love the line where you write (Gods wonderous wonders of the sky--is such beauty to the eye)--I love that line but I feel that the (Gods) should be "God's) and that would read better--great job.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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You have a good flow with you poem and good artwork--this is an encouraging poem and something that we all can look forward to--I love the line where you write (Gods wonderous wonders of the sky--is such beauty to the eye)--I love that line but I feel that the (Gods) should be "God's) and that would read better--great job.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind words they are very much appreciated.
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You did a wonderful job--keep it up!!!!
Comment from skychild27
I like how light and effervescent this poem is, naturally, because the clouds are involved, but it also tells us to stop and just enjoy gods wonders and beauty around us all. very nice piece, thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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I like how light and effervescent this poem is, naturally, because the clouds are involved, but it also tells us to stop and just enjoy gods wonders and beauty around us all. very nice piece, thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind words they are very much appreciated.
Comment from Alexander E Poet
I Thought this was and amazing poem I like the imagery in this poem nice visuals, I love the story its tells and the inward thinking, great message Nice write I love what i found, i like the poetry of it. Well done No errors no mistakes, Alexander
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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I Thought this was and amazing poem I like the imagery in this poem nice visuals, I love the story its tells and the inward thinking, great message Nice write I love what i found, i like the poetry of it. Well done No errors no mistakes, Alexander
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind words they are very much appreciated.
Comment from nsth
Hey Angel Debbie, great selection of art-work for your choice of words and expressions! I was just thinking of the word "Billowed" in place of the word "puffy"! What do you think? :) God/Jehovah/Lord he certainly does provide some beautiful wonders. Thanks for the poetry!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Hey Angel Debbie, great selection of art-work for your choice of words and expressions! I was just thinking of the word "Billowed" in place of the word "puffy"! What do you think? :) God/Jehovah/Lord he certainly does provide some beautiful wonders. Thanks for the poetry!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2010
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Billowed to me sounds a bit like describing smoke. As the dark black smoke billowed from it's stack! Thank you anyways for your kind words they are very much appreciated.
