Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

This was a rather cool piece of poetic art to have read. I found this to be littered with humor. This has a very good rhythm to its thoughts. I liked reading and writing a review for this excellent piece of poetic art... John

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2010

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010

Thank You for the kind words. They are greatly appreciated. Thank You again,

Comment from brattz

Good

I saw the title of this poem and thought twice about reading,it turned out to be very interesting view of the routines of a housewife. Though I felt the rhyme forced at times. I am just wondering whether the line "... Oh what fun" is literal or sarcastic. This poem has the ability to sustain the reader and make him want to keep on reading.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2010

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010

You can take this which ever way you wish as all readers have there own personal way of reading things. I wrote it for rememberance of my day and to look back and laugh. Thank You for the kind words. They are greatly appreciated. Thank You again,

Comment from Fikshunlover

Excellent

Another amusing poem. You have a knack for describing the many frustrating things that can occur during a typical day at home. Good job.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2010

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010

Thank You for the kind words. They are greatly appreciated. Thank You again,