Freestylin'
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Purple Custard!"A collection of poems about writing
19 total reviews
Comment from shirley31
absolutely stunning full the the rim of magical imagery full of emotion and your last line simply wonderful, i think through writing there is nothing we can't achieve i love the theme of the purple custard and all in all a fantastic write! was like being on the magic carpet ride!
reply by the author on 31-May-2011
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absolutely stunning full the the rim of magical imagery full of emotion and your last line simply wonderful, i think through writing there is nothing we can't achieve i love the theme of the purple custard and all in all a fantastic write! was like being on the magic carpet ride!
Comment Written 31-May-2011
reply by the author on 31-May-2011
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Thanks so much for this - I did not mean for you to review but am very chuffed you like it! Have you checked out Xylok yet? He is now back on site - I think you might like his imagination and word play :)))
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i'm very shy! will do!
Comment from daniela.albu
There is lot of imagination here, internal rhyme that confers glamor to your poem and an original style too. "Emerald hopes" is such a great metaphor.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2010
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There is lot of imagination here, internal rhyme that confers glamor to your poem and an original style too. "Emerald hopes" is such a great metaphor.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2010
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Hi daniela.albu,
thank you so much for your very encouraging and complimentary review! Much appreciated - Cally :)
Comment from Twomoon
A very lovely poem, one that I could feel and fly with, your choice of words were incredible and I loved every minute of this adventure shared with your passion..thank you for taking me there!! much love and luck, twomoon
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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A very lovely poem, one that I could feel and fly with, your choice of words were incredible and I loved every minute of this adventure shared with your passion..thank you for taking me there!! much love and luck, twomoon
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Hi Twomoon,
what can I say? You have brightened my day!
Thank you so much for your encouraging review and luck wishes!
They are really appreciated - Cally :)))))
Comment from Lady Jane
The imagery next to the image make this "purple custard" piece magnificent. I enjoyed reading this piece of poetic merriment, however, I don't think I'd want to see the fairies flit and twitter cause then people would say I was on the crack you spoke of :) LOL. Nicely written, with creative voice and structure. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2010
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The imagery next to the image make this "purple custard" piece magnificent. I enjoyed reading this piece of poetic merriment, however, I don't think I'd want to see the fairies flit and twitter cause then people would say I was on the crack you spoke of :) LOL. Nicely written, with creative voice and structure. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2010
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Hi JaCherie,
thank you so much for reviewing! (Sorry about the late reply, I have gotten a little behind AGAIN! LOL)
I found your review informative, very encouraging and funny!! Thank you - Cally :)))
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi fairy dancer,
Love the title and the whole joyful poem. It surely excited the imagination and took one on a wildly wonderful adventure... which was so much fun. A delight!
Best wishes and blessings to you.
Cheers, W ^-^
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Hi fairy dancer,
Love the title and the whole joyful poem. It surely excited the imagination and took one on a wildly wonderful adventure... which was so much fun. A delight!
Best wishes and blessings to you.
Cheers, W ^-^
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Hi whizpurr,
thank you so much for enthusiastic and encouraging review! It is much appreciated. Thanks also for the luck wishes, and the best of luck to you too! - Cally :)
Comment from BeccaInaDaffydill
Poetic justice that your poem inspired by him, and his poem inspired by you are both up for poem of the month. Loved this for its Xylokian quality, though I'm sure a lot of your poetry is equally awesome :-)
Anyway, this almost seemed like a song (or a rap), and I found myself smiling and be-bopping my head to the awesome images. Who doesn't love surfin cosmic dust?
~Becca
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Poetic justice that your poem inspired by him, and his poem inspired by you are both up for poem of the month. Loved this for its Xylokian quality, though I'm sure a lot of your poetry is equally awesome :-)
Anyway, this almost seemed like a song (or a rap), and I found myself smiling and be-bopping my head to the awesome images. Who doesn't love surfin cosmic dust?
~Becca
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Hi Becca,
Yes, I thought it funny when I saw Xy's poem (directly underneath mine on the listing) for Poem of the Month.
I am very chuffed that it made you smile!
Thank you so much for reviewing - Cally :)))
Comment from JeJo
Great rhymes and alliteration in this wonderful free-verse about letting go and freeing yourself to the world of possibilities. My absolute favorite lines were these:
"seeped through in a splendiferous splash
of star spangled wonderment" - wonderful alliteration and descriptive wording
Very creative concept of 'purple custard'
I thoroughly enjoyed your free-vLovely presentation as well. Good luck in the contest. All the best, JeJo
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Great rhymes and alliteration in this wonderful free-verse about letting go and freeing yourself to the world of possibilities. My absolute favorite lines were these:
"seeped through in a splendiferous splash
of star spangled wonderment" - wonderful alliteration and descriptive wording
Very creative concept of 'purple custard'
I thoroughly enjoyed your free-vLovely presentation as well. Good luck in the contest. All the best, JeJo
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Hi JeJo,
thanks so much for reviewing!
I think my fave poetic style to write has to be free verse with occasional rhymes and alliteration, I think it makes it flow better.
Thanks for the luck wishes too!
Have a good weekend - Cally :)))
Comment from Warren Rodgers
Wow , what a wonderfully imaginative piece you have penned. Lots of imagery sweeps the reader away with verses like "splendiferous splash of star spangled wonderment" and "blue slipstream of impossible improbability". Superb writing I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Good luck to you in the contest. Best regards, Warren
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Wow , what a wonderfully imaginative piece you have penned. Lots of imagery sweeps the reader away with verses like "splendiferous splash of star spangled wonderment" and "blue slipstream of impossible improbability". Superb writing I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Good luck to you in the contest. Best regards, Warren
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Hi Warren, thank you so much for your very enthusiastic and encouraging review.
Oooooooh! I wonder what a blue slipstream of impossible improbability would look like? LOLOL
Thanks again - Cally :)))
Comment from marcii
I found your poem to be very imaginative and enjoyed reading it immensly. It was like it flowed and ebb the the tide coming in. Just wonderful.
Good luck in the contest.
Marcii
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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I found your poem to be very imaginative and enjoyed reading it immensly. It was like it flowed and ebb the the tide coming in. Just wonderful.
Good luck in the contest.
Marcii
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Hi marcii, thank you so much for your lovely review and comments. I appreciate you telling me what you think, and your luck wishes too! Thanks again - Cally :)))
Comment from Judian James
What a nice plug for Xylok who is the BEST!! Now to your piece ... very well done. Clever beginning all serious and skilled and then, bam, purple custard invades the senses!
A very enjoyable piece. The only thing I might change, would be the title so the "purple custard" bit is totally unexpected for even more of a shock value! Just a thought
No matter what, I loved it and am pleased I found your work today!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2010
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What a nice plug for Xylok who is the BEST!! Now to your piece ... very well done. Clever beginning all serious and skilled and then, bam, purple custard invades the senses!
A very enjoyable piece. The only thing I might change, would be the title so the "purple custard" bit is totally unexpected for even more of a shock value! Just a thought
No matter what, I loved it and am pleased I found your work today!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2010
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Hi Judain James,
thank you so much for your extremely enthusiastic and encouraging review! I had not thought about hiding the title, will have a think!
Thanks again - Cally :)
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Not hide it but change it so no one expects "purple custard"!!
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Not hide it but change it so no one expects "purple custard"!!
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Not hide it but change it so no one expects "purple custard"!!
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Not hide it but change it so no one expects "purple custard"!!
