Emotions of Love and Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Dreams"Love and Life with many emotions
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Comment from lanatreadway
Beautiful thoughts. With just a little more thought I believe you could accomplish greater flow by choosing some words that would equalize your rhythms in each line better and make for easier reading, but otherwise, great poem. I like the attention drawn to dreams left to die because of fear. Many need to be reminded that through God they can accomplish their dreams. Congratulations on your growing relationship with Jesus Christ. I write mostly about the Lord. It's a beautiful way to praise Him from our hearts.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Beautiful thoughts. With just a little more thought I believe you could accomplish greater flow by choosing some words that would equalize your rhythms in each line better and make for easier reading, but otherwise, great poem. I like the attention drawn to dreams left to die because of fear. Many need to be reminded that through God they can accomplish their dreams. Congratulations on your growing relationship with Jesus Christ. I write mostly about the Lord. It's a beautiful way to praise Him from our hearts.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Thank you for the nice compliments. They are very much appreciated.
Comment from TT7Z
Good job. Good meter and rhyme. I like the message of hope. Enjoyed the read very inspirational. Again good job. Thank you.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Good job. Good meter and rhyme. I like the message of hope. Enjoyed the read very inspirational. Again good job. Thank you.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Thank you for the nice compliments. They are very much appreciated.
Comment from Maine Girl
Very nice. The piece was well written and the stanzas flowed smoothly. Yes, roses are one of God's good blessings! I'm not sure where mosquitoes fit in though, lol, maybe for the frogs! Anyway, thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Very nice. The piece was well written and the stanzas flowed smoothly. Yes, roses are one of God's good blessings! I'm not sure where mosquitoes fit in though, lol, maybe for the frogs! Anyway, thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Thank you for the nice compliments. They are very much appreciated. I didn't know either! lol
Comment from chells36
What a lovely poem
this is a well thought out piece of work that also send out a message of hope.
Even if we don't feel this way there is still hope in hopeless.
Well written with a great flow
Keep up the good work xx
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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What a lovely poem
this is a well thought out piece of work that also send out a message of hope.
Even if we don't feel this way there is still hope in hopeless.
Well written with a great flow
Keep up the good work xx
Comment Written 23-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Thank you for the nice compliments. They are very much appreciated.
