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Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Souls of the sea"Variety of Old and fun Poems
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Comment from Nanashirley
This is a nice poem. It flows and is very easy to read. It has a great message and is plain in it's thoughts. I found no editing unless from the fact of earth should be face.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2010
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This is a nice poem. It flows and is very easy to read. It has a great message and is plain in it's thoughts. I found no editing unless from the fact of earth should be face.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2010
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thank you again
Comment from Soledadpaz
Your words make me see the people themselves, lost and waiting for the tide to carry them, where they can float to safety and the haven of heaven.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Your words make me see the people themselves, lost and waiting for the tide to carry them, where they can float to safety and the haven of heaven.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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thank you soso much
Comment from misscookie
Love the way you write no matter what the subject
You always make the readers aware of what you are saying.
This is a very beautiful poem writing with strong coviction. This is a good write.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Love the way you write no matter what the subject
You always make the readers aware of what you are saying.
This is a very beautiful poem writing with strong coviction. This is a good write.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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wow thank you
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Wow, Your welcome.
Comment from Amyna
Every word in Souls of the Sea is so true. I loved the concern and care you show in this poem.
"From the fact of the earth" -- is it face of the earth or fact?
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Every word in Souls of the Sea is so true. I loved the concern and care you show in this poem.
"From the fact of the earth" -- is it face of the earth or fact?
Comment Written 23-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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so so much, thank you
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You are so welcome... Al the best, Amyna
Comment from Readywriter52
The concept of people floating helpless in a metaphoric sea sounds depressing to me. If they need to be rescued only makes it worse. People who wait to get rescued almost certainly drown.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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The concept of people floating helpless in a metaphoric sea sounds depressing to me. If they need to be rescued only makes it worse. People who wait to get rescued almost certainly drown.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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thank you
Comment from Chuck23
The title drew me in for a read of your poem. I found your poem very interesting and enjoyable to read... seems to offer a great philosophy in your words! I also like the imagery I got in my mind, as I had a view of the end being compared to souls at sea.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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The title drew me in for a read of your poem. I found your poem very interesting and enjoyable to read... seems to offer a great philosophy in your words! I also like the imagery I got in my mind, as I had a view of the end being compared to souls at sea.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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thank you so much
Comment from lgm859
Awesomely written. Good choice of words, flowing smoothly and the useage of metaphors. Creative imagery that will stimulate the creativity of the readers imagination.
Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Awesomely written. Good choice of words, flowing smoothly and the useage of metaphors. Creative imagery that will stimulate the creativity of the readers imagination.
Well done.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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thank you so much
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you're welcome
Comment from Ann Smith
The image of the souls drifting about is such a strong one. I like the metaphor of the souls being gathered in the nets. I especially like the lines, 'success will come even as the drops of rain.' God is the creator and He made a way. Thank you for your inspiring words today. ann
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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The image of the souls drifting about is such a strong one. I like the metaphor of the souls being gathered in the nets. I especially like the lines, 'success will come even as the drops of rain.' God is the creator and He made a way. Thank you for your inspiring words today. ann
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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you are the best, thank you
Comment from missy98writer
wierdgrace,
your poem is profound and beautifully written. Gorgeous art work of Angelheart's you've used. Vivid imagery, excellent narrative and very descriptive writing. I enjoyed the lines:
Oh! Throw out the nets and gather them in,
To safety and warmth,
And save them from sin.
Oh! Thou sons of light and love
Erase hatred and selfishness
From the fact of the earth.
Success will come even
As the drops of rain.
We know not the hour,
But the end will be victorious.
Cleaver use of metaphors with the phrases: 'kingdom of truth and knowledge', 'drifting along with the tide', 'dark as the night', 'show them the way', 'save them from sin', and 'the end will be victorious.' Fabulous poem. I'm awarding you five stars of excellence. I look forward to reading more of your writings.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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wierdgrace,
your poem is profound and beautifully written. Gorgeous art work of Angelheart's you've used. Vivid imagery, excellent narrative and very descriptive writing. I enjoyed the lines:
Oh! Throw out the nets and gather them in,
To safety and warmth,
And save them from sin.
Oh! Thou sons of light and love
Erase hatred and selfishness
From the fact of the earth.
Success will come even
As the drops of rain.
We know not the hour,
But the end will be victorious.
Cleaver use of metaphors with the phrases: 'kingdom of truth and knowledge', 'drifting along with the tide', 'dark as the night', 'show them the way', 'save them from sin', and 'the end will be victorious.' Fabulous poem. I'm awarding you five stars of excellence. I look forward to reading more of your writings.
Melissa.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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thank you again
Comment from chita
You have great artwork and good arthor notes--your poem has a good flow and you deliver a message about people today to seeking the Kingdom of truth and knowledgen which we all need--you write of ending hatred and selfishness--where you write(From the fact of the earth) I believe that you meant to write "From the face of the earth"--also use proper punctuation in your arthor notes--otherwise a great job.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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You have great artwork and good arthor notes--your poem has a good flow and you deliver a message about people today to seeking the Kingdom of truth and knowledgen which we all need--you write of ending hatred and selfishness--where you write(From the fact of the earth) I believe that you meant to write "From the face of the earth"--also use proper punctuation in your arthor notes--otherwise a great job.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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thank you my friend
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You're welcome:))
