Emotions of Love and Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "My Love For You"Love and Life with many emotions
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Comment from bgreads
sentiments expressed well. It seems a little contrives as the author attempts to get the rhyme together. This lessens the impact.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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sentiments expressed well. It seems a little contrives as the author attempts to get the rhyme together. This lessens the impact.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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Please explain what you mean by contrives I am having a hard time understanding your review. Thank You
Comment from TT7Z
Very nice ballad to a very special person in your life from a very special person, you. Nicely put together, nice flow to the piece, rhyming is good overall the piece is excellent. The picture is also a perfect match. Six stars is not an option or you would have them. Well done Ms. Debbie. Thank you.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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Very nice ballad to a very special person in your life from a very special person, you. Nicely put together, nice flow to the piece, rhyming is good overall the piece is excellent. The picture is also a perfect match. Six stars is not an option or you would have them. Well done Ms. Debbie. Thank you.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2010
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Thank you for the kind words. Glad you liked it.
