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Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "What Love can do"Variety of Old and fun Poems
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Comment from Readywriter52
I agree with your definitions of love. It is indeed unselfish and it can't be bought. Many people see love many different ways. Best of all it is priceless and free. It means no matter what your status in life is; it is still available to that person.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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I agree with your definitions of love. It is indeed unselfish and it can't be bought. Many people see love many different ways. Best of all it is priceless and free. It means no matter what your status in life is; it is still available to that person.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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so true,
Comment from barbara.wilkey
What Love can do is a well written poem. You are a very good poet. I wish you would write more poerty. Please keep us posted on when you go to into the hospital.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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What Love can do is a well written poem. You are a very good poet. I wish you would write more poerty. Please keep us posted on when you go to into the hospital.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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I will, I have a email address I will post, as the hospital have one to send mail to for me, thank you so much
Comment from Nanashirley
I like the poem. I flows nice and is easy to understand. I like the way the thoughts are clear and enjoyable. I saw no editing needed.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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I like the poem. I flows nice and is easy to understand. I like the way the thoughts are clear and enjoyable. I saw no editing needed.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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thank you so glad it does
Comment from missy98writer
wierdgace,
your poem is wonderfully written. Beautiful art work and color presentation. Vivid imagery, excellent narrative, great cadence and very descriptive writing. I especially enjoyed the lines:
Love is unselfish,
Understanding and kind,
For it sees with its heart
And not with its mind.
Love is the answer
That everyone seeks;
Love is the language
That every heart speaks
Great title 'What Love Can Do.' Your poem is marvelous. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Have a nice Monday. I'm awarding you five stars of excellence for your free verse poem.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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wierdgace,
your poem is wonderfully written. Beautiful art work and color presentation. Vivid imagery, excellent narrative, great cadence and very descriptive writing. I especially enjoyed the lines:
Love is unselfish,
Understanding and kind,
For it sees with its heart
And not with its mind.
Love is the answer
That everyone seeks;
Love is the language
That every heart speaks
Great title 'What Love Can Do.' Your poem is marvelous. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Have a nice Monday. I'm awarding you five stars of excellence for your free verse poem.
Melissa.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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Youare so so kind as always
Comment from Bellringer
Well done poem which is somewhat similar to a previous poem. But the sentiment is always good to see again. Your treatise on love is spot on. Your poem is well constructed and filled with love. Very inspirational work. Best wishes, hector
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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Well done poem which is somewhat similar to a previous poem. But the sentiment is always good to see again. Your treatise on love is spot on. Your poem is well constructed and filled with love. Very inspirational work. Best wishes, hector
Comment Written 16-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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thank you so so much my friend
Comment from misscookie
I like your poem very much and I love how it flows this is a perfect Valentine poem my friend. It will truly touches the heart of the readers.
This is a good write.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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I like your poem very much and I love how it flows this is a perfect Valentine poem my friend. It will truly touches the heart of the readers.
This is a good write.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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thank you so much
Comment from fastdigits
The power of love whispered in
words of beauty as they glide
down the screen with feeling
and grace, softly caressing all
who stop by your site.
Well done
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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The power of love whispered in
words of beauty as they glide
down the screen with feeling
and grace, softly caressing all
who stop by your site.
Well done
Comment Written 16-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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thank you so so much
Comment from lola29
I wish I had six stars to award you for this most sublime poem. You've certainly captured the love's essence in most a beautiful way. Bravo!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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I wish I had six stars to award you for this most sublime poem. You've certainly captured the love's essence in most a beautiful way. Bravo!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2010
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thank you so so much just saying it is enough
Comment from lucia
This is a wonderful poem with a beautiful message of love. In your first verse, oh yes! So true! Love indeed can transform many a heart. In the second and third verses, again, so true. Unselfish love is the most meaningful gift a person can give to each other. And, indeed love cannot be bought for any price as mentioned in the fourth verse. In the last two verses, I believe you are making mention of helping those who need it the most; the fallen ones. Good luck in this contest. Lucia (Joyce)
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2010
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This is a wonderful poem with a beautiful message of love. In your first verse, oh yes! So true! Love indeed can transform many a heart. In the second and third verses, again, so true. Unselfish love is the most meaningful gift a person can give to each other. And, indeed love cannot be bought for any price as mentioned in the fourth verse. In the last two verses, I believe you are making mention of helping those who need it the most; the fallen ones. Good luck in this contest. Lucia (Joyce)
Comment Written 16-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2010
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Yes, did I enter this in a contest, I could not find one for it, but thank you
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Well, I think your last word might serve this piece better if you substituted stranger for enemy.
You are far too beautiful and talented to decide to die. Stay with us all for a little while longer.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2010
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Well, I think your last word might serve this piece better if you substituted stranger for enemy.
You are far too beautiful and talented to decide to die. Stay with us all for a little while longer.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2010
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Oh I plan on it, I was not sure about posting this, I wrote it a long time ago.
