Emotions of Love and Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Thank You God for Your Beauty"Love and Life with many emotions
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Comment from TT7Z
This work is worthy of being an exception. It is very fluid. It has continuity of expression of idea and appreciation of such majesty in the skies. If I cover the picture and read, I still get a visual image of that same type of picture. Well done. Thank you for a well done piece.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2010
This work is worthy of being an exception. It is very fluid. It has continuity of expression of idea and appreciation of such majesty in the skies. If I cover the picture and read, I still get a visual image of that same type of picture. Well done. Thank you for a well done piece.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2010
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Thank You very much such a nice surprise on this review!
Comment from thebyers21
I love it. I see you have a wonderful relationship with God and that is great. I wish I could say the same, but I am trying;)
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2010
I love it. I see you have a wonderful relationship with God and that is great. I wish I could say the same, but I am trying;)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2010
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Thank You for becoming my Fan, I am sure we will have a wonderful time sharing our thoughts and feelings as poets should. Take care and God bless you and your family
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Debbie I love your writing and I'm glad you enjoy mine. I see you are a religous woman so I want to warn you. Some of my writing will have cursing and violence. Not that much, but sometimes. The last thing I want to do is offend my only fan;)
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Don't worry about it, Its writing everyone has feelings that might offend someone somewhere. There is no getting around that. I had to put one of my poems "Lick and Tickle under the 18 rule of fan story because of its content. And it was written for a laughter affect for a sick friend,
Comment from RKagan
I know from your author notes that this is about a plane ride, but it seems to me like the flight of a bird. Before I read the author notes I thought it was. The visuals are beautiful and it reads very nicely
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2010
I know from your author notes that this is about a plane ride, but it seems to me like the flight of a bird. Before I read the author notes I thought it was. The visuals are beautiful and it reads very nicely
Comment Written 12-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2010
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I'm glad I did put author notes in there. I didn't realize that this poem could have refered to a bird. Thanks for sharing this with me. Your comments are very welcomed.