Comment from TT7Z

Excellent

Your message was a little lacking with out your authors notes. Love encompasses a lot of emotion that you left out. As for everlasting beauty being linked to vibrant caring. Can a person care without being vibrant about it?
Just a thought. Overall I hope you win.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2010

I will add some author notes to this as it seems my message was confusing to you. Thank You for your comments. I will give them some thought.

reply by the author on 10-Aug-2010

I had author notes at time of your review, I have also added to them. Would greatly appreciate you reviewing poem and re-evaluate it. Thank You again.

Comment from Siddhartha Jatana

Excellent

I guess, I reviewed your previous piece too...
Anyways, this one is beautiful again...
Ma favorite bit:
"...Everlasting Beauty "
Truly,Love is perpetually beautiful...
Well done!
All the best for the contest...
God bless you!

Love and Regards,
Sid

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2010

Thank you for your supporting words. I hope it does well to in the contest.

Comment from Triple P

Excellent

Great short acrostic. I find that the shorter the acrostic, the more difficult to write. You've done a beautiful job here.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2010

Thank you for your supporting words. I hope it does well to in the contest.