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Love and Life with many emotions
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Comment from
Melba
I like this poem. It definitey shows the male ego. How cute it seems at times as they try to impress the girl. It's better to go ahead and let them mess up to remind them you can tolerate them even if imperfect.
Melba
Comment Written 09-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
Your so right! Thank you for the understanding of this poem. I hope more see it this way also!
Comment from
suzzy
this is funny - i was a check out girl in a grocery store once and yes you are right a lot of men hate to shop. this brought back a lot of funny memories of that job to me and many broken grocery bags on the bus home. very realistic writing i could see all the trama of their shopping well done
Comment Written 09-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
Thank You alot for the kind words. Glad you got a goodd laugh.
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