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Comment from ulster3
Hello wierdgrace.
I just love your poem. It conveys encouragement and a sense of family in that final line too. This is definitely a lovely upbeat read.
Fondly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2010
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Hello wierdgrace.
I just love your poem. It conveys encouragement and a sense of family in that final line too. This is definitely a lovely upbeat read.
Fondly, Rebecca
Comment Written 10-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2010
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thank you so so much
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My pleasure to read your work! Reb
Comment from Amyna
This is so true of the spirit. I can't imagine myself coming up with these ideas but you seem to do it so effortlessly all the time.
Thank yo,Weirdgrace for this brilliant piece.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2010
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This is so true of the spirit. I can't imagine myself coming up with these ideas but you seem to do it so effortlessly all the time.
Thank yo,Weirdgrace for this brilliant piece.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2010
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thank you so much
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You are so welcome. I always enjoy your work. Thank you!
Comment from Nanashirley
I liked the poem. It is hard to say a lot in a few words but I feel that you did it. The picture is good and the verse flows well. I found no editing needed.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2010
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I liked the poem. It is hard to say a lot in a few words but I feel that you did it. The picture is good and the verse flows well. I found no editing needed.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2010
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thank you
Comment from Soledadpaz
That is so beautiful, Grace. The artwork gives the appearance of a bright and colorful quilt and your words are so perfect and so true.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2010
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That is so beautiful, Grace. The artwork gives the appearance of a bright and colorful quilt and your words are so perfect and so true.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2010
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thank you so so much
Comment from missy98writer
wierdgrace,
your free verse is short and beautifully written. Cool art work of Angelhearts you've used. I enjoyed all of the lines:
Our spirit is like a diamond in the rough.
It is there, hidden, for a while,
waiting to come forth and shine and
send forth its brilliant light.
This is home ties.
I love the philosophy in your free verse. Your poem is an excellent entry in the free verse poetry contest. Good luck. It was a pleasure and a delight to read your free verse.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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wierdgrace,
your free verse is short and beautifully written. Cool art work of Angelhearts you've used. I enjoyed all of the lines:
Our spirit is like a diamond in the rough.
It is there, hidden, for a while,
waiting to come forth and shine and
send forth its brilliant light.
This is home ties.
I love the philosophy in your free verse. Your poem is an excellent entry in the free verse poetry contest. Good luck. It was a pleasure and a delight to read your free verse.
Melissa.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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thank you so so much
Comment from Readywriter52
The picture is unusual. I like the comparison of the spirit to a diamond in the rough. Like the diamond our spirit can be made to shine. Our spirit is who we are.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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The picture is unusual. I like the comparison of the spirit to a diamond in the rough. Like the diamond our spirit can be made to shine. Our spirit is who we are.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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so so true, I had a couple of pictures put neither was perfect so I picked this one, thank you again
Comment from jwlee211
great poem. I like the message that is true our spirit is there waiting to break through and hopefully shine for those around. Great work
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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great poem. I like the message that is true our spirit is there waiting to break through and hopefully shine for those around. Great work
Comment Written 08-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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thank you so so much
Comment from Alan K Pease
What a spirit you have. The poem simple, warm and lovely. Your family is composed of diamonds- in interests literature and love. It's good to have good critics. I hope that your treatment will lead to remission. Your portfolio speaks for what you have done. I hope you write as often as you have until your family takes over. Which I hope is a long time off.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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What a spirit you have. The poem simple, warm and lovely. Your family is composed of diamonds- in interests literature and love. It's good to have good critics. I hope that your treatment will lead to remission. Your portfolio speaks for what you have done. I hope you write as often as you have until your family takes over. Which I hope is a long time off.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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you are so kind, thank you
Comment from KayteeF
This lovely free verse comparing our spirit to a rough diamond, is very well thought out.
Simply said and showing how our spirit can only be seen in little bits at a time.
The more pieces unveiled the more the spirit shines, just like a diamond.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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This lovely free verse comparing our spirit to a rough diamond, is very well thought out.
Simply said and showing how our spirit can only be seen in little bits at a time.
The more pieces unveiled the more the spirit shines, just like a diamond.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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thank you so so much
Comment from lgm859
this is written with good choice & usage of words, good flow, a interesting free verse that finds beauty in a aperson through a diamond.
Our spirits will always shine like a diamond when find love, feel love, be in love and share love.
Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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this is written with good choice & usage of words, good flow, a interesting free verse that finds beauty in a aperson through a diamond.
Our spirits will always shine like a diamond when find love, feel love, be in love and share love.
Well done.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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thank you so so much
