Emotions of Love and Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Life of a Bug and You"Love and Life with many emotions
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Comment from TT7Z
Excellent meter and flow to this writing. I also like the message. Very clear and enjoyable read. I wonder if there is deeper meaning interwoven in what is just on the surface. As with all your works nicely done, ms A_Debbie.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2010
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Excellent meter and flow to this writing. I also like the message. Very clear and enjoyable read. I wonder if there is deeper meaning interwoven in what is just on the surface. As with all your works nicely done, ms A_Debbie.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind words, they are greatly appreciated.
Comment from telespectral
I liked your poem. I know a lot of people feel this way. The way you worded the poem was very flowing and easy to read. It is creative and well done. Good Job!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2010
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I liked your poem. I know a lot of people feel this way. The way you worded the poem was very flowing and easy to read. It is creative and well done. Good Job!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2010
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Thank you so much ! Your kind words just make my start of this day just grand! Thank You
Comment from Donna Peavler
I really enjoyed reading this. I thought that it was creative and inspiring, but I found it hard to grasp the relationship between the title and poem. I think you're a great poet. Great job!
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I really enjoyed reading this. I thought that it was creative and inspiring, but I found it hard to grasp the relationship between the title and poem. I think you're a great poet. Great job!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2010
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Thank you I will take your comment into consideration. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Angel Debbie:
those who love tend to get stomped on
just like the bug, I fear
but often it's because others
don't understand, my dear
the importance of just doing right
and loving just because
yet our lives are truly better than
those who see love as our flaw
I look forward to reading more of your
work soon
love,
jan
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2010
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Angel Debbie:
those who love tend to get stomped on
just like the bug, I fear
but often it's because others
don't understand, my dear
the importance of just doing right
and loving just because
yet our lives are truly better than
those who see love as our flaw
I look forward to reading more of your
work soon
love,
jan
Comment Written 08-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2010
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Thank you please become a fan then you will know when the next poem comes out. Thank you for your kind words. Have a wonderful day. Thank you
Comment from Kingsland
This poem has a very good rhythm to its thoughts and phrases.I liked when you used your bug metaphor as it really added a lot to this poem. This was just a well written piece of poetic art to have read and written a review for... John
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2010
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This poem has a very good rhythm to its thoughts and phrases.I liked when you used your bug metaphor as it really added a lot to this poem. This was just a well written piece of poetic art to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 08-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2010
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Thank you once again for your kind words and praise. They are surely noted. Thank You
