Emotions of Love and Life
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Comment from write4u808
Your message comes across well that controlling relationships and possessive behavior are the opposite of God's love. Well done. The goodness of the love of God is clearly offered. Good work!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2010
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Your message comes across well that controlling relationships and possessive behavior are the opposite of God's love. Well done. The goodness of the love of God is clearly offered. Good work!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2010
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Thank You for your kind words. Thay are very much appreciated.
Comment from MdmNormandy
I definitely got your message. At times in reading your poetry I felt fewer words possibly could have helped the flow; but we all have our own style. I did enjoy your subject whole heartedly.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2010
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I definitely got your message. At times in reading your poetry I felt fewer words possibly could have helped the flow; but we all have our own style. I did enjoy your subject whole heartedly.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2010
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I have taken your thought into concideration and have changed a few things around to make it flow better. Thank You for your kind review.
