Emotions of Love and Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Heaven"Love and Life with many emotions
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Comment from chita
You have a good flow with your poem.You deliver a powerful message about living by the grace of God you have gotten things such as the dog and a baby is born and you are prepared to go to the place we all want to when we die--great job.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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You have a good flow with your poem.You deliver a powerful message about living by the grace of God you have gotten things such as the dog and a baby is born and you are prepared to go to the place we all want to when we die--great job.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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Thank you for the wonderful compliments.
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You did a great job--keep the good work up!!!!
Comment from Domino
Maybe 'must die' instead of 'do die' for better grammar?
It's strange how so many with strong faith fear dying when they believe they're heading somewhere better. It sure beats mass suicide and is natural human survival instinct, plus the fear of pain in passing over I guess.
Nice writing, Ray xx
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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Maybe 'must die' instead of 'do die' for better grammar?
It's strange how so many with strong faith fear dying when they believe they're heading somewhere better. It sure beats mass suicide and is natural human survival instinct, plus the fear of pain in passing over I guess.
Nice writing, Ray xx
Comment Written 02-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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Thank you for the gracious compliment and the thought of must die I like better then the do die. As everyone must die for I have never heard of anyone in human life living foreve. Thanks for your insight!
