An Avenging Angel's Tale
The Sword of Righteousness16 total reviews
Comment from irishauthorme
This is one of your best! The action, the intrigue, and the interplay between Satan and the angel was masterful!
To be taken back to the 'original sin' in the Garden of Eden was an inspired stroke. Everyone knows the story, and all who believe it have wondered what would have happened, had Adam and Eve been allowed to remain in the Garden.
Great job!
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This is one of your best! The action, the intrigue, and the interplay between Satan and the angel was masterful!
To be taken back to the 'original sin' in the Garden of Eden was an inspired stroke. Everyone knows the story, and all who believe it have wondered what would have happened, had Adam and Eve been allowed to remain in the Garden.
Great job!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2010
Comment from apelle
what an extraordinary entry ! Full of imagination and carrying a message man has been trying to redeem for years...
mechanically as usual, every t is crossed and every i is dotted...
thanks for entering my contest
adina
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what an extraordinary entry ! Full of imagination and carrying a message man has been trying to redeem for years...
mechanically as usual, every t is crossed and every i is dotted...
thanks for entering my contest
adina
Comment Written 02-Aug-2010
Comment from sweetwoodjax
wow, this is an excellent entry into the contest, it was written with good form, good flow, i enjoyed the soldier looking for the people who caused sin to enter this world and the one who betrayed jesus. i wish you well in the contest
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wow, this is an excellent entry into the contest, it was written with good form, good flow, i enjoyed the soldier looking for the people who caused sin to enter this world and the one who betrayed jesus. i wish you well in the contest
Comment Written 02-Aug-2010
Comment from Begin Again
John,
Hmm..time traveling and not knowing why, but simply playing the necessary part and moving on. How wonderful! Drawing the reader along with you, not knowing where the next stop may take us or what adventure lies ahead. Great Job! Good luck in the contest.
Carol
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John,
Hmm..time traveling and not knowing why, but simply playing the necessary part and moving on. How wonderful! Drawing the reader along with you, not knowing where the next stop may take us or what adventure lies ahead. Great Job! Good luck in the contest.
Carol
Comment Written 02-Aug-2010
Comment from ulster3
Hello Thesis.
Intriguing read and an excellent write. You have managed all the transitions of time and place with expertise. I thought when I came to the garden I would read of Lilith instead of Eve. However, this is more familiar. Some imagination you have! I think this is a typo: questionably.
I wish you well in the contest.
Fondly, Rebecca
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Hello Thesis.
Intriguing read and an excellent write. You have managed all the transitions of time and place with expertise. I thought when I came to the garden I would read of Lilith instead of Eve. However, this is more familiar. Some imagination you have! I think this is a typo: questionably.
I wish you well in the contest.
Fondly, Rebecca
Comment Written 01-Aug-2010
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Wow, this is very intriguing, my friend. I wish you will continue this story. How original--it seemed almost forbidden (changing what happened in the Bible). It was my pleasure to read you. Good luck.
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Wow, this is very intriguing, my friend. I wish you will continue this story. How original--it seemed almost forbidden (changing what happened in the Bible). It was my pleasure to read you. Good luck.
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2010
