Emotions of Love and Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Earth"Love and Life with many emotions
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Comment from TT7Z
You have an interesting view of what is to come. Your writing was an easy read. Its flow and rhyme were done well. I wonder how close you are to what will be. Thank you for such a wonderful read.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2010
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You have an interesting view of what is to come. Your writing was an easy read. Its flow and rhyme were done well. I wonder how close you are to what will be. Thank you for such a wonderful read.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2010
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Thank You for your kind words. They are truely appreciated.
Comment from countess gram
This is a lovely spiritual poem. The flow is good and the structure is sound. But there is an error,"soles" should be " souls". Other than that ,good job!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2010
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This is a lovely spiritual poem. The flow is good and the structure is sound. But there is an error,"soles" should be " souls". Other than that ,good job!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2010
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I have corrected the error, Thank You for pointing that out. Thank You for the review. Have a wonderful day!
Comment from chells36
In reading this poem it reminds me of the strong beliefs that have guided me through some very hard and unhappy times in my life .
The temperate ways of our lord shows in the skies and warns us to be aware of all things good and bad
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2010
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In reading this poem it reminds me of the strong beliefs that have guided me through some very hard and unhappy times in my life .
The temperate ways of our lord shows in the skies and warns us to be aware of all things good and bad
Comment Written 30-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2010
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Thank You for sharing your thoughts.
