New Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Just a Bright Note"Variety of Old and fun Poems
11 total reviews
Comment from Amicus
What a neat haiku, grace....I enjoyed reading it and admire the vividness of the imagery as well as the well executed fragment/phrase construction.
Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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What a neat haiku, grace....I enjoyed reading it and admire the vividness of the imagery as well as the well executed fragment/phrase construction.
Well done.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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thank you again
Comment from MikiB
A very nice Haiku written here about a finch. The picture
of the finch on part of a chair or something is very nice. We don't see finches like this.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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A very nice Haiku written here about a finch. The picture
of the finch on part of a chair or something is very nice. We don't see finches like this.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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thank you so much
Comment from templar knight
I am unsure how to review this poem you say its a Hakaiu is that similar to a seneru,your poem though short and sweet sounds very nice and finches are beautiful birds,well done cheers.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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I am unsure how to review this poem you say its a Hakaiu is that similar to a seneru,your poem though short and sweet sounds very nice and finches are beautiful birds,well done cheers.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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thank you, as some times I am confused with is with
Comment from gabriowl
Hmmmm. I love that moment you have described. Haiku is so great for that. Like a beautiful calligraphy character. We have many red-wing blackbirds in our backyard, and I have experienced the sense of this poem personally. Very enjoyable and colorful!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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Hmmmm. I love that moment you have described. Haiku is so great for that. Like a beautiful calligraphy character. We have many red-wing blackbirds in our backyard, and I have experienced the sense of this poem personally. Very enjoyable and colorful!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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thank you so so much
Comment from Amyna
It sure is a bright note! I loved this happy little verse... Finches are such happy birds and one can sit hours watching them, and listening...
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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It sure is a bright note! I loved this happy little verse... Finches are such happy birds and one can sit hours watching them, and listening...
Comment Written 23-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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thank you so much
Comment from misscookie
I LOVE THE ARTWORK
IT'S GREAT FOR YOUR POEM.i THINK THIS IS A VERY REFRESHING POEM AND YOU EXPRESS A SPRING AND SUMMER FEELING
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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I LOVE THE ARTWORK
IT'S GREAT FOR YOUR POEM.i THINK THIS IS A VERY REFRESHING POEM AND YOU EXPRESS A SPRING AND SUMMER FEELING
Comment Written 23-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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thank you again
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It was my pleasure. Have a nice evening.
Comment from Readywriter52
The picture is pretty and goes with the poem well. The words help the reader visualize the finch easily. It red head is vibrant and colorful.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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The picture is pretty and goes with the poem well. The words help the reader visualize the finch easily. It red head is vibrant and colorful.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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thank you so much
Comment from ulster3
Hello wierdgrace.
This is an wonderfully descriptive haiku. The suet stick is very original. The picture is great.
Fondly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Hello wierdgrace.
This is an wonderfully descriptive haiku. The suet stick is very original. The picture is great.
Fondly, Rebecca
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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thank you again
Comment from Bellringer
A very nice little poem showing the reader a vibrant colorful bird. The bird shown here represents a delicate nature that we must care for and respect. Best wishes, Hector
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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A very nice little poem showing the reader a vibrant colorful bird. The bird shown here represents a delicate nature that we must care for and respect. Best wishes, Hector
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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thank you so much
Comment from missy98writer
wierdgrace,
your haiku is in perfect form and syllable count. Exquisite art work of the red bird you used. Your haiku paints a perfect picture in my head. I enjoyed all the lines:
On the suet stick
rose colored finches, vibrant,
delicate and gay
Marvelous use of alliteration in you haiku. I awarding you five stars of excellence for your nature haiku.
Melissa.
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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wierdgrace,
your haiku is in perfect form and syllable count. Exquisite art work of the red bird you used. Your haiku paints a perfect picture in my head. I enjoyed all the lines:
On the suet stick
rose colored finches, vibrant,
delicate and gay
Marvelous use of alliteration in you haiku. I awarding you five stars of excellence for your nature haiku.
Melissa.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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thank you so much
