Dear Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Dear Chains"Addressing different themes in a form of a letter
26 total reviews
Comment from Eli Wilde
Hi Pupa,
I really like this idea and how you've written it up too. Very creative and enjoyable to read. Good presentation too. Those chains, I guess we all carry some. For me, they are becoming lighter as I get closer to Him. Yes, indeed.
Cheers, Frank
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Hi Pupa,
I really like this idea and how you've written it up too. Very creative and enjoyable to read. Good presentation too. Those chains, I guess we all carry some. For me, they are becoming lighter as I get closer to Him. Yes, indeed.
Cheers, Frank
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Yes, you are absolutely right, I believe He takes the burdens off our backs, until we can feel so light and free that we can fly! Guess He makes us see, what we usually didn't.
Glad you liked it, thanks Frank.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Bellringer
Well done poem that effectively portrays the struggles we face when burdened by emotional/psychological chains. These chains are formed insidiously link by link over a period of time. The poem ends on a positive note--the willing mind can create a solution, a "brand new key." Best wishes, Hector
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Well done poem that effectively portrays the struggles we face when burdened by emotional/psychological chains. These chains are formed insidiously link by link over a period of time. The poem ends on a positive note--the willing mind can create a solution, a "brand new key." Best wishes, Hector
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Thanks Hector, so glad you appreciated my poem.
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Pupa
Comment from Mª Luisa López Pisú
Poem sensational. Congratulaciłn.
The best poem yn reod.
To much inspiratiłn, is very in yours vers.
Armoniłn and fluid. You enjoys me. Trantes very much
God bless you. Din¡mica
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Poem sensational. Congratulaciłn.
The best poem yn reod.
To much inspiratiłn, is very in yours vers.
Armoniłn and fluid. You enjoys me. Trantes very much
God bless you. Din¡mica
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Oh, you are so sweet and guess what, I will try to read one of yours too!! Can't promise to understand, but will surely try.
Thanks Maria Luisa, most appreciated review.
Love
Pupa
Comment from amada
This is a very insightful work. I especially liked this phrase "take off your loads of deep blues, as I do with agonizing shoes." It tells much about my character as well.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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This is a very insightful work. I especially liked this phrase "take off your loads of deep blues, as I do with agonizing shoes." It tells much about my character as well.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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As always Amada, we find similarities whenever we read each other. Thanks dear friend, and let us take of those heavy disabling shoes and run freely!
Love
Pupa
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form, good flow, good meter, an enjoyable read about breaking the chains that bind us and find strength in Him, excellent job, a message everyone needs to read and take to heart
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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this is very well written with good form, good flow, good meter, an enjoyable read about breaking the chains that bind us and find strength in Him, excellent job, a message everyone needs to read and take to heart
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Thanks so much.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Krugerrand
A great reminder to us all, Pupa, that we do have to make the effort and sometimes just putting one foot in front of the other is the best way to start. Quickly then we can build momentum and leave behind all that we don't want.
As always, many thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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A great reminder to us all, Pupa, that we do have to make the effort and sometimes just putting one foot in front of the other is the best way to start. Quickly then we can build momentum and leave behind all that we don't want.
As always, many thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Exactly, step by step, just find the first one! Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts, Krugerrand.
Love
Pupa
Comment from bhogg
Hi Pupa - I liked this a lot. Written in a unique fashion, a letter to the "chains" that hold you back. Melancholy at times, but ends with hope. The font was a bit hard for me to read (I'm old), but it was such in fitting with the letter theme. Regards, Bill
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Hi Pupa - I liked this a lot. Written in a unique fashion, a letter to the "chains" that hold you back. Melancholy at times, but ends with hope. The font was a bit hard for me to read (I'm old), but it was such in fitting with the letter theme. Regards, Bill
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2010
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Bill, pleeeeeease don't say you're old! only one year younger than I am LOL!
Thanks for your great comments in this review.
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Pupa
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi PUPA,
I love a poem with a lesson and this one speaks the wisdom. Yes, we are often the cause of adding to our own pain. I liked these lines best...
If I caused you to be, my strength of mind
will manage to craft a brand new key,
to unlock and set my feet free.
A good rhyme and flow. A pleasure to read and review. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Hi PUPA,
I love a poem with a lesson and this one speaks the wisdom. Yes, we are often the cause of adding to our own pain. I liked these lines best...
If I caused you to be, my strength of mind
will manage to craft a brand new key,
to unlock and set my feet free.
A good rhyme and flow. A pleasure to read and review. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Thanks Becky, so glad you enjoyed this one.
Love
Pupa
Comment from fastdigits
An artfully crafted poem of the
self imposed chains which bind
us.
Words that cry out, whispered from
deem within, knowing that you are
the only one who can unbind these
chains.
An emotionally written poem that flows
down the screen in a soul baring presentation
of self reflection.
Well done
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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An artfully crafted poem of the
self imposed chains which bind
us.
Words that cry out, whispered from
deem within, knowing that you are
the only one who can unbind these
chains.
An emotionally written poem that flows
down the screen in a soul baring presentation
of self reflection.
Well done
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Thanks so much.
Love
Pupa
Comment from robbis4
Wow a marvelous piece of writing , captured the mood and moment of self inflicted melancholy and but left us with hope with truly magical vibrant words, inspired well done thank you for sharing bob
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Wow a marvelous piece of writing , captured the mood and moment of self inflicted melancholy and but left us with hope with truly magical vibrant words, inspired well done thank you for sharing bob
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2010
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Thanks Bob, appreciate your encouraging review.
Love
Pupa
