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Comment from adewpearl
Grace, I like your short poem with its strong love/above rhyme - loved ones bound together in a circle of love - a beautiful message :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Grace, I like your short poem with its strong love/above rhyme - loved ones bound together in a circle of love - a beautiful message :-) Brooke
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you so much, you are the best
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Tie of Loved ones
Close as Stars Above
Bound Together
One great circle
of love
A good choice of words
as you speak of love.
Good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Tie of Loved ones
Close as Stars Above
Bound Together
One great circle
of love
A good choice of words
as you speak of love.
Good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you so much my friend
Comment from gabriowl
Wow - with the picture this is really a dynamic short poem! It's hard to imbue a sense of environment and emotion with only 15 words or less... but you have done it here. A great capture of the true scope of 'soul family'. Be well, and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Wow - with the picture this is really a dynamic short poem! It's hard to imbue a sense of environment and emotion with only 15 words or less... but you have done it here. A great capture of the true scope of 'soul family'. Be well, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you so much many great ones hear
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Your poem says a lot with so few words, and you're right--the picture is perfect. It was my pleasure to read you today.
Good luck in the contest. I'm sure you'll do well.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Your poem says a lot with so few words, and you're right--the picture is perfect. It was my pleasure to read you today.
Good luck in the contest. I'm sure you'll do well.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you so much, many great entries
Comment from fastdigits
Fifteen words of warmth and
tenderness caressing the screen
as it floats down to that final
word, "Love."
Well done and good luck
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Fifteen words of warmth and
tenderness caressing the screen
as it floats down to that final
word, "Love."
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 16-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you so much many great entries
Comment from Kaladore
I think this is a good short poem. I like the ending, how life is a cycle that moves on and on, we love, we mate, we love more, we die, love begins again in our loved ones.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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I think this is a good short poem. I like the ending, how life is a cycle that moves on and on, we love, we mate, we love more, we die, love begins again in our loved ones.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you so much
Comment from darling
Not sure about the comparison of the Stars above being close ...perhaps you mean that our Loved ones are bound together as close as stars are to each other? Either way, I enjoyed the piece and the artwork was perfect for it..good luck in the competition!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Not sure about the comparison of the Stars above being close ...perhaps you mean that our Loved ones are bound together as close as stars are to each other? Either way, I enjoyed the piece and the artwork was perfect for it..good luck in the competition!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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I am so glad you enjoyed
Comment from judelesemann
Great poem. I love writers who can say what they mean in a few lines like you did. Your thought was simple and sincere. The emotion was apparent and I felt it as I read this romantic poem. Be blessed, Jude
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Great poem. I love writers who can say what they mean in a few lines like you did. Your thought was simple and sincere. The emotion was apparent and I felt it as I read this romantic poem. Be blessed, Jude
Comment Written 16-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you so so much
Comment from DrJane
What a beautiful expression of the circle of love! Although this poem is brief, your imagery immediately captures and holds the reader's interest. Artwork is a great match.
Blessings,
Jane
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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What a beautiful expression of the circle of love! Although this poem is brief, your imagery immediately captures and holds the reader's interest. Artwork is a great match.
Blessings,
Jane
Comment Written 16-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you so much, many great entries on this one
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
your short love poem is very well written. Beautiful art work and color presentation. Excellent narrative, great imagery, and very descriptive writing in fifteen words. I enjoyed the lines:
Tie of Loved ones
Close as Stars Above
Bound Together
One great circle
of love
I love the concept of us being bound together with an invisible force. Your poem is a marvelous entry in the contest. Good luck in the voting booth.
Missy.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Poet,
your short love poem is very well written. Beautiful art work and color presentation. Excellent narrative, great imagery, and very descriptive writing in fifteen words. I enjoyed the lines:
Tie of Loved ones
Close as Stars Above
Bound Together
One great circle
of love
I love the concept of us being bound together with an invisible force. Your poem is a marvelous entry in the contest. Good luck in the voting booth.
Missy.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you so much, and there are many great entries
